Good so far. Mc had second chance so he back in timeline before apo. And of course it will strong and cunning mc. I just hope you can add some romance, but not too much.
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LIKEI’ll be honest if you don’t know romance don’t be like those horny author that make **** novel with harem and try making it a little or some but don’t do that harem stuff
Err cunning? He's not smart in his decision making and doesn't think ahead other than copying the general plan of what he saw others do in his prior timeline. Honestly he was supposedly one of the top people in his timeline before being send back yet he bumbles about like a chicken without a head when it comes to following through his plans. He has poor decision making skills all round and the author ain't helping much by making everything backfire on him.