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Rairaidani
RairaidaniLv145yr
2019-12-01 23:30

Good so far. Mc had second chance so he back in timeline before apo. And of course it will strong and cunning mc. I just hope you can add some romance, but not too much.

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Apocalypse_GOD
Apocalypse_GODAuthor

I'll try but I don't know much of how to write it.

OnePun
OnePunLv6

Just build up characters like how marvel does, slowly. Throwing and mentioning names here and there.

Apocalypse_GOD:I'll try but I don't know much of how to write it.
Apocalypse_GOD
Apocalypse_GODAuthor

I’ll work on maybe a bit of subordinate and superior relationship and not so much romance. Since I don’t really get how to write a proper romance theme I’ll stick with what I’ve been doing so far.

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Ky4ler
Ky4lerLv4

I’ll be honest if you don’t know romance don’t be like those horny author that make **** novel with harem and try making it a little or some but don’t do that harem stuff

Apocalypse_GOD:I’ll work on maybe a bit of subordinate and superior relationship and not so much romance. Since I don’t really get how to write a proper romance theme I’ll stick with what I’ve been doing so far.
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LISTLv5

Err cunning? He's not smart in his decision making and doesn't think ahead other than copying the general plan of what he saw others do in his prior timeline. Honestly he was supposedly one of the top people in his timeline before being send back yet he bumbles about like a chicken without a head when it comes to following through his plans. He has poor decision making skills all round and the author ain't helping much by making everything backfire on him.

Eleanor_La_Pure
Eleanor_La_PureLv1

If you like second chance/time travel novels, or heroic DarkFantasy stories, give it a try: APOCALYPSE WAR: Survive. Die & Restart This is probably the future best novel on Webnovel.

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