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LokiJokerLv65yr
2019-12-31 17:47

Typical Boy kidnapped by Shadow Organization, Trained to be a Killer, then Rescued and Adopted by his Savior. It also has the whole Reluctant Gamer that once he starts he finds Hidden Class and Kicks ass thing going on. That be said it's not a bad read. I Wish for more Constant Updates, but as this story is at this time Free can't really Complain much.

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ProudMonkeyAuthor

Thanks for the review.

MortiferLv14

Is the mc OP?

ProudMonkey:Thanks for the review.
MortiferLv14

Is the mc OP?

ProudMonkey:Thanks for the review.
ProudMonkeyAuthor

Kukukukuku.... Yeah... I guess..... Kakakaka

Mortifer:Is the mc OP?
MortiferLv14

Why you guess?

ProudMonkey:Kukukukuku.... Yeah... I guess..... Kakakaka
ProudMonkeyAuthor

Read.... And I don't know what is OP definition for you .... Kakakaka

Mortifer:Why you guess?
MortiferLv14

Gary Stu character.

ProudMonkey:Read.... And I don't know what is OP definition for you .... Kakakaka
MonarchofchaosLv2

Is it a harem. Does he only have on fml. What I mean is does he end up with 1 wife

ProudMonkey:Thanks for the review.
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This is a weird split with martial art and video games. The reason it is weird is that this is mainly a martial arts book with the mc telling of his video game experience (I exaggerate, but it is how it feels). This is very unusual because usually novels will make it the other way around. Don't be fooled by the description, this is not a video game focused book with a martial arts background, martial arts is the focus. As for the book out of the game, it is fairly descent. A bit lacking in describing stages of cultivation, but is more or less fine. The is some evil underground threat looming over that is not really expanded on. The thing I find weird is there seem to only be genius cultivators from the young people and no one older has special talents or abilities and are only strong due to time, but the out of game story is not half bad. As for the video game portion, I will start by saying I usually like video game light novels, but this one seems plain sloppy. Very little detain is given about the game mechanics and the insanely high numbers with no context annoys me. It usually is along the line of: the mc just took 738,000 damage at level 30 and he is fine even though at level 1 he had 1000 hp. There is nothing concrete about the game, except the skills which have a description but have a relatively long cool down (say 20 second) but he uses every attack. I don't know about you, but even I can run 10 meters and attack 3 times in 20 seconds (I would not likely hit but I could do it), but he uses this skill to attack an opponent attacks 3 times, killing the opponent and uses the same skill again immediately after. It really makes the mc feel underwhelming when you think, even a lazy unathletic person like me could do that... What is so special about that.

daniwalhLv15

I normally don't drop novels this fast, but I got too pissed off. I don't know about everyone else, but personally I started this novel partially because I saw that the MC was raised as a killer after being kidnapped by a dark organisation. I normally gravitate to these stories because it means the MC is ruthless and broken which makes for interesting reading (not raised to be assassin, but Supreme Magus is a great example of broken character). But then there is a timeskip and they are now teenagers. These two prodigies, who have grown up competing and sharpening each other every day get bullied by their slightly older sister who we have never had any indication is strong. Very annoying, but I accepted it and chalked it up to a staple of the genre, despite how infuriating it is. But then he gets attacked by a girl, randomly and with no provocation. So what happens. Does this MC who was raised as a weapon until the age of 9 fight back? Does the MC, who had to survive by fighting both male and female kids his own age to survive retaliate? No, he fucking doesn't. He takes it. Then she attacks him again. Is he finally provoked, and pushed to reveal a little of his killer instinct? Hell no. He doesn't like hitting women. Then when she attacks him again and pushes him to fight, and he wins, does he show any kind of ruthlessness? No he politely says goodbye, and says she can find him any time. This, in simple terms is a complete betrayal of who he is as a character, and it's a complete betrayal of the readers who have invested in the character. So dropped.

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