To All the Readers, Please write your reviews so that i can get an idea on how do you see my Novel. And please rate it as well, so we can have our rating. Sincerely Yours, Proud Monkey.
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LIKEOnly one real problem And that is the 4th wall breaks that you have it would be one thing if you had a dead pool type story or character that was similar but you don't so all it does is break immersion
Sooo I like the story but if I’m to give my score then you would go really low in the grammar department. The other thing is did he modify his character when he enters the game or does he look like he did. Is it even possible to modify it. Is there no penalty for dying or for attacking/pk-ing? That’s for now but I like the story so far.
I admit that I'm quite weak in terms of grammar. And the MC didn't modify his character, same goes for others. All they did is to get an IGN and select a race. The rest will be set as it is. Each race have different starting stats and he happened to fell in Human Race starting point. And there is a penalty for dying and attacking, its just that I didn't give an emphasis into it and just give a slight explanation in previous chaps. As for the MC, he didn't get any penalties from attacking others because of the special effect of his mask. That's all and thanks.
I admit that I'm quite weak in terms of grammar. And the MC didn't modify his character, same goes for others. All they did is to get an IGN and select a race. The rest will be set as it is. Each race have different starting stats and he happened to fell in Human Race starting point. And there is a penalty for dying and attacking, its just that I didn't give an emphasis into it and just give a slight explanation in previous chaps. As for the MC, he didn't get any penalties from attacking others because of the special effect of his mask. That's all and thanks.