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InfiniteZer0
InfiniteZer0Lv124yrInfiniteZer0

Pretty disappointing. There are quite a few glaringly obvious flaws with this novel. First off, everything works out way to well for the mc. He gets saved by a really powerful group who realistically would not give a rats ass about him and gives him a cultivation technique suited for him (because he cannot learn other without meridians). He gets a super common technique for cultivations that everyone can get their hands on for themselves, all their cousins, AND their dogs and finds it is an incomplete technique that even in its first stages of unlocking is better than all other technique out there. All while not even 1 person in the hundreds, if not thousands, of years has thought maybe I should see how far this technique can go. And this only is in the first few chapters, it still just as bad, but uses that technique as a main reason for it working. Secondly, the whole story is about how it is dangerous to be a wisp in a cultivation world because everyone want to use you for resources, but no out of 120 or so chapters there is only 2 times anyone has even considered using them as resources for cultivation. Every character you meet is either strictly good or strictly bad, and most of the time everyone is they meet are good people.

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Is that a Wisp?

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Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaLv5Demiurge_Ohara

thx for the early warning.

Daoist845071
Daoist845071Lv11Daoist845071

those points are explained in the later chapters why so keep reading and you will get to know

I_HateYourMom
I_HateYourMomLv1I_HateYourMom

can't you just say why....

Daoist845071:those points are explained in the later chapters why so keep reading and you will get to know
Daoist845071
Daoist845071Lv11Daoist845071

then it will be spoilers so can't do it

I_HateYourMom:can't you just say why....
EternalEden
EternalEdenLv13EternalEden

Well then, I guess people are going just have to blindly trust you just because you said something without going into any depth then huh?

Daoist845071:then it will be spoilers so can't do it
Yogsa
YogsaLv4Yogsa

yes

EternalEden:Well then, I guess people are going just have to blindly trust you just because you said something without going into any depth then huh?
Daoist_Rubeno
Daoist_RubenoLv11Daoist_Rubeno

There is no reason to read this story. It's too frustrating.

Yogsa:yes
Jims_Rid
Jims_RidLv4Jims_Rid

You can just endure the first few chapters. I don't know if the Author actually reads the criticisms and keeps them in mind or he's just improving as an author but the more chapters you read, the better the reading experience. The story is evolving and actually comes back to explain points that were previously plot holes, slowly making everything make sense

Daoist_Rubeno:There is no reason to read this story. It's too frustrating.