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Jims_Rid

Jims_Rid

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A reader, a Pokemon fanfic writer, and will soon write own novel.

2020-12-06 JoinedPhilippines
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  • Jims_Rid
    Jims_Rid6d
    Commented

    Author, you did a good job. I have a suggestion though. I noticed that everything so far has been under control. Every impossible moment, the MC has a sure fire way to survive so while he has been put under pressure, he hasn't overcome any impossible moment so far so it might be a good idea to let the mc experience moments of desperation. His fighting style makes it so that he can be aggressive and retreat all the time so I understand that it would be difficult to put the MC in that kind of situation unless he's facing the likes of Nagato, Obito, and Madara. I would say that your work is one of the best fanfics so far, on par with Outsider's resolve but as long as you can pull it off with another character or characters other than Itachi madara obito nagato or even reanimated hashirama or minato, I would say that your work would be the best so far. But it's okay since your work is still one of the best so far. Anyway, it's just a suggestion

    Ch 562 Chapter 556 : Categorizing Kekkei Genkai (2)
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
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  • Jims_Rid
    Jims_Rid1mth
    Replied to Jims_Rid

    you can also do hybrid. upload one at a time and then when you find yourself busy and tired, you can also upload all three chaps at once.

    Ch 218 Interlude_6.1 (218)
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    Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
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  • Jims_Rid
    Jims_Rid1mth
    Commented

    3 chapters per week at once sounds good for you, you get more rest and all while one chapter a time is good for the book. Uploading one at a time will keep your readers hooked up more, you'll find more discussions per chapter. What happens when you upload chapters all at once is that you'll find all the discussions on the last chapter. Readers will usually visit the book once per week. Which means less discussions and votes. Uploading one at a time makes it so that there will be more discussions and visits to the book every week. more visits = more votes and more popularity.

    Ch 218 Interlude_6.1 (218)
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    Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
    Anime & Comics · FictionOnlyReader
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  • Jims_Rid
    Jims_Rid1mth
    Commented

    It's not much but take my coins!

    Ch 216 CH_6.45 (216)
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    Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
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  • Jims_Rid
    Jims_Rid2mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chap!

    Ch 203 CH_6.32 (203)
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    Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
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  • Jims_Rid
    Jims_Rid2mth
    Replied to Pewpewcachoo

    No matter how well written a female character is in a well written story, as long as some fanfic author picks them up with a harem tag, it's almost always guaranteed that their characters and personalities would die off and become a one dimensional character that falls for the mc for no reason

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    Marvel-ous Ninjutsu
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  • Jims_Rid
    Jims_Rid2mth
    Commented

    I don't know if you have a sibling but this is not how I imagined Sasuke as a kid with a younger brother. The most likely scenario would be Sasuke trying to smile and look strong in front of the younger brother to assure him that everything is going to be alright. Then he would say something like "I'm going to continue my studies at the academy. Don't worry, leave everything to me. Just stay here and be good blablabla". What kid asks the younger kid "What are your plans?" as if they're the same age.

    "I am going to continue my academy from tomorrow. what about you?"
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    Naruto: Uchiha's Genjutsu Demon
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  • Jims_Rid
    Jims_Rid2mth
    Replied to sean_robbins

    I haven't read this yet but I'd have to disagree about your opinion on bows. Bows and arrows are actually decent even in the naruto world. There are plenty of applications for bows. Arrow trajectory can be manipulated with wind style, improving accuracy and even power. Also, have you forgotten Sasuke's jutsu during the final battle, Indra's arrow? It was just a jutsu but other than naruto, I can't imagine any one else having an answer for it aside from DMS kakashi and the Otsutsukis or perhaps barely Minato

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    Blazing eyes (Uchiha OCSI)
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  • Jims_Rid
    Jims_Rid3mth
    Replied to Demon_Bat

    Imagine how much cooler it would be for Konoha to deal with Akatsuki, Orochimaru, and Danzo at the same time? Imagine how this could affect Takuma's growth as a Shinobi. Instead of dying early, which wouldn't affect anything, it's better to see more of the most hated characters in the series. Perhaps, the author could turn Danzo from hated to loved, or even cool villain.

    Ch 196 CH_6.25 (196)
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    Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
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  • Jims_Rid
    Jims_Rid4mth
    Replied to Sunny_Dream

    He has everything under control, at least on the surface. But this is the naruto world we're talking about. He will be silencing Danzo but what if in the case that Orochimaru or Kabuto revives Danzo? Divulging secrets to dying men in naruto doesn't seem to be a good idea, even if it's for the satisfaction of readers

    Ch 724 Chapter – 717 Why can’t it be me?
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    Reborn into Naruto World with Tenseigan
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  • Jims_Rid
    Jims_Rid5mth
    Replied to TJ_Rose

    he's a ninja. there's no point in showing it in public in the first place. however, the part that makes sense is the training itself. since rasengan is the pinnacle of chakra control, just the training itself would help the mc improve in chakra control, even if he doesn't master it

    He was going to get it...
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    Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
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  • Jims_Rid
    Jims_Rid5mth
    Replied to DaoistGatsu973

    the problem is that there's no challenge in that. To make a good story, there has to be a challenge

    Ch 26 Chapter 26
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    One Piece: The Unreal Adventure
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  • Jims_Rid
    Jims_Rid6mth
    Commented

    Your updates are what I always look forward to every week

    Ch 165 CH_5.22 (165)
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  • Jims_Rid
    Jims_Rid6mth
    Commented

    masterful writing!

    Ch 162 CH_5.19 (162)
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  • Jims_Rid
    Jims_Rid7mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapters!

    Ch 152 CH_5.9 (152)
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    Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
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  • Jims_Rid
    Jims_Rid7mth
    Commented

    everything was worth the wait

    Ch 149 CH_5.6 (149)
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    Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
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  • Jims_Rid
    Jims_Rid7mth
    Commented

    this is stupid. no matter what, he's a kage of a village and he should not be making this kind of mistake due to arrogance. he should have known that Danzo is tricky. this is a very stupid mistake

    Raikage did not worry whether 'Danzo' is really dead or not… Raikage has confidence that no one can survive such an attack after taking it head-on. In Raikage's eyes, Danzo is already a corpse!
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    Reborn into Naruto World with Tenseigan
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  • Jims_Rid
    Jims_Rid7mth
    Replied to Sinofwrath

    It could also be possible that he could stop it but he just turned a blind eye to it for the sake of his clan

    Fugaku's words died in his throat when Shisui looked up, and the Sharingan glowed in the dim room lit by oil lamps. But then the familiar three-tomoe design changed into something Fugaku had never seen before.
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    Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
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  • Jims_Rid
    Jims_Rid7mth
    Replied to VaishnavC

    It's basically the same but you have to take note that he's the author. He's not obliged to post chapters everyday. He can skip a week and just post one chapter next week and you wouldn't be able to do anything about that. If he skips one day and does double chapters tomorrow, he's being generous. Being an author and having to upload everyday can be tiring, especially when you're a fanfic author where you can only rely on fans for funds to keep going

    Ch 189 Author note.
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    Fairy Tail: Shinigami
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  • Jims_Rid
    Jims_Rid7mth
    Replied to Rayan_Alzahrani_4430

    not the mc but another character

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    Pokemon: The Steel Tyrant
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