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I love how circumstances basically force MC to become a dictator yet there is no rush to make MC abandon his plans because having complete control over Earth is not right and let's expose Earth to the danger because misguided morality is more important than survival of the species.
How curious. One of the biggest weaknesses of MC necromantic magic and any other magic in fantasies i have read till now is lack of ability to interact with technology making huge portion of magic arsenal useless against tech . I like it that there is a way for magic to interact with technology other than fireball in the face.
How curious. I much more like this version. MC shows more area to growth despite prior experiences rather than instantly learning everything due to previous life. And of course martial arts. I feel there is more emphasis here on hand to hand combat since the beginning.
I wonder how is lifespan even a problem in a world where there is so many ways to change the bodies I. The event of failure. Even 5 rank demon lord could change the bodies and Mc shown a way to create completely new body from ground zero. Maybe there is a way for people to be immortal even at lower levels?
It's still ridiculously low. Star rank 7 which is one rank below Demon God which is equivalent to star rank 8 can live for merely below one thousand years. Meanwhile demon God is straightforwardly immortal. Unless star rank 8 are also immortal like demon gods. Or demons have simply vastly greater lifespans even at lower lvl? Still considering how many characters were hopping bodies maybe lifespan doesn't matter that much?
Demon God lvl is equivalent to 8 stars. My earlier astonishment came from the information that humans that live almost at the top of pyramid have so ridiculously low lifespans in comparison to demons. On one hand we have lifespan that counts millions of years as mere thought on the other hand just rank below Demon God for humans has measly 400y of lifespan total.
I'm not saying to reveal whole history from the first life. Just a snippet to counter perception that "gamers are awesome hip hip hurra! They can even survive tower which even prepared almost by military people can't". It's due to making those other colored shirt people trope young masters. It creates this annoying comparison. There is not a lot about games going on fortunately but this perception remains.
Well, I got a feeling that MC perceives his gaming in first life as a good thing while those who prepared are shown as typical trope young masters needing slapping because they haven't prepared for the tower while Mc "gaming" prepared him for prologue. Aside of gaming you can show in prologue that MC regrets first life beginning being a loser or sth. It's clearly his own fault he was white shirt nobody if he literally was escaping from his problems instead of preparing for inevitable teleportation
Minor complaint. I have noticed that MC often celebrated and often mentions how gaming helped him in the first life in the first round. But it isn't something to be celebrated. Let me get it straight. Billions of people are kidnapped somewhere by higher powers and humans have vague idea of some kind of competition and MC instead of trying to prepare buried himself in games to run away. And his mother also was kidnapped. People who were preparing themselves are often shown as unreliable snobs who achieve nothing. I would in your place input in first chapters an info why MC was white shirt. That it was his initial cowardice that led him to be weak and only as he adventured he grew up both physically and mentally. That would add depth to the character. Otherwise the whole "gaming is great and helping in tower climbing" while serious preparation for years others undergo is bad doesn't make big sense to me. While I can understand that You want to add tropes for some semi young masters who haven't prepared concretely for tower. Gaming system isn't rocked science. It doesn't take lot of time to comprehend that struggle equals prize. And training for years should give those people mental and physical advantage over MC who wasted time... Playing.
Do you have it contracted on qidian? Have you tried Patreon? If it's not contracted I would try on your place give a royal road a chance or self publish on Amazon. It's good enough to be released asebook. And you have definitely enough chaps to have at the very least book 1.