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rynafly
rynaflyLv144yr
2020-07-26 19:27

TL;DR: This novel is like having a steak dinner after only eating hamburger helper for months. First off, the writing itself is on point. Just talking about grammar, punctuation, and spelling, it reads like someone actually proofread the chapters, and there aren't noticeable errors that distract from reading! Many available webnovels seem to suffer from a lack of proofreading, but this one doesn't. Even if this author doesn't actually proofread. In addition, the author's voice and varied vocabulary ensure good sentence variety and proper flow in each chapter all the way to the end, upon which one realizes they've read a lot, but still want to keep going. Once again, good flow is often hard to find in webnovels, so this one is a breath of fresh air. Or rather, a bite of sirloin steak. Plus, the characters have tangible character development--the big brain imp from the first 100 chapters is very different than the one now. Not just in power and figure, but also in what he values and how he reacts to events now. Ok I'm tired of writing now--it's a good book, story good, characters good, author good, I def dont regret spending 3 days reading all the way through. Though my wallet hurts a bit, I'd do it again.

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rynafly
rynaflyLv14

Also mr dice guy if u ever publish it as an ebook or as a real book or series of books let us know bc I'm sure I'm not the only one who would buy it. And make more people read it. It legit wouldn't be out of place in local libraries.

DiceVR
DiceVRAuthor

I would love to, but I sadly can't with this novel. However, I am working on a new novel that I would be able to put out there in different forms (also, without going premium on here)

rynafly:Also mr dice guy if u ever publish it as an ebook or as a real book or series of books let us know bc I'm sure I'm not the only one who would buy it. And make more people read it. It legit wouldn't be out of place in local libraries.
Cade_Fischer
Cade_FischerLv1

You sound like an english teacher reviewing the best essay you have every seen

Adel_Quinn
Adel_QuinnLv13

does he ever evolve from a imp into something like a greater demon?

rynafly
rynaflyLv14

Bro I dont know if it counts as a spoiler but I dont wanna give spoilers in case a new reader who cares about that sort of thing looks over here so all I can say is: keep going it gets better

Adel_Quinn:does he ever evolve from a imp into something like a greater demon?
Adel_Quinn
Adel_QuinnLv13

ill trust your words big bro. hopefully there is some greater demon evolution i have a weakness for those 👿

rynafly:Bro I dont know if it counts as a spoiler but I dont wanna give spoilers in case a new reader who cares about that sort of thing looks over here so all I can say is: keep going it gets better
Logan_Paul_3820
Logan_Paul_3820Lv13

🙃

Ferasight
FerasightLv4

Its quite litterly 1 of they best book when it Come to character development to be perfectly. Honest it does have 1 Of, they best plot in novel but not un orginal take on novels but i haven’t read much, that Interest me as much as this

Christopher_Ketner
Christopher_KetnerLv15

perfect synopsis

Christopher_Ketner
Christopher_KetnerLv15

yep

Ferasight:Its quite litterly 1 of they best book when it Come to character development to be perfectly. Honest it does have 1 Of, they best plot in novel but not un orginal take on novels but i haven’t read much, that Interest me as much as this
Li_Shou_
Li_Shou_Lv2

Any romance?

rynafly
rynaflyLv14

No romance, but try reading it! it's good. I am a big fan of a good romance story, but I feel theres far too many stories on this site where the male main lead is lusted after by the entire female population of the multiverse. that, or a romance story is indelicately shoved in, like trying to put pineapple on pizza but you didnt chop the pineapple first However, there are an abundance of familial bonds, and bonds of friendship portrayed in the story, and if you enjoy them fantasy novels I'd def recommend giving this novel a read, even if you're just looking for romances

Li_Shou_:Any romance?
Li_Shou_
Li_Shou_Lv2

PerFect i hate romaces

rynafly:No romance, but try reading it! it's good. I am a big fan of a good romance story, but I feel theres far too many stories on this site where the male main lead is lusted after by the entire female population of the multiverse. that, or a romance story is indelicately shoved in, like trying to put pineapple on pizza but you didnt chop the pineapple first However, there are an abundance of familial bonds, and bonds of friendship portrayed in the story, and if you enjoy them fantasy novels I'd def recommend giving this novel a read, even if you're just looking for romances
Robert_Hay
Robert_HayLv1

you're either a complete idiot or you meant to leave this review on a different book. this book is absolute garbage. I think the grammar actually might be the worst part. it's so bad I think a fourth grader could do a better job. did you actually read this? I tried, but I simply refuse to continue past chapter 155. this book is a waste of time. it seems like it might get better, but it's only leading you on. the quality is egregious in almost every way. it's just stupid.

Lucien121
Lucien121Lv15

LIES!!!! IT. GETS. BETTER.

Robert_Hay:you're either a complete idiot or you meant to leave this review on a different book. this book is absolute garbage. I think the grammar actually might be the worst part. it's so bad I think a fourth grader could do a better job. did you actually read this? I tried, but I simply refuse to continue past chapter 155. this book is a waste of time. it seems like it might get better, but it's only leading you on. the quality is egregious in almost every way. it's just stupid.
Brywon_Troks
Brywon_TroksLv1

To each his own, stop pushing your opinion unto others...If you don't like it, post a review of your own... **: I liked this book very much and that is my taste and choice...

Robert_Hay:you're either a complete idiot or you meant to leave this review on a different book. this book is absolute garbage. I think the grammar actually might be the worst part. it's so bad I think a fourth grader could do a better job. did you actually read this? I tried, but I simply refuse to continue past chapter 155. this book is a waste of time. it seems like it might get better, but it's only leading you on. the quality is egregious in almost every way. it's just stupid.
visebes96
visebes96Lv12

I just confirm what he says

AlexTheBard
AlexTheBardLv12

ye the grammar in the earlier chapters sucks bc of the pov. It starts with a (kinda) newborn imp but as our mc gets smarter the grammar gets better, in other words, the grammar in the earlier parts of the novel is by no means a weakness but rather a strength. I do agree the beginning is quite weak plot-wise, as in you don't get invested into the story right away, but as some of my fellow readers have pointed out already, it gets better. Finally, most of the novels on here don't have this level of grammar, vocabulary and congruency. The mc also doesn't pull out his final form in every single one of his fights (I must admit, there are quite a few deus ex machina moments but most of them are set up beforehand) or have every girl in a one mile radius drop her panties for him. Both of these things I consider a strength to the novel as you also don't see this done that often on here. I am not trying to invalidate your opinion as I'm just stating mine but I advise you to try giving more convincing arguments than "a fouth grader could do better" or "it's stupid" next time you write a review. You don't give any evidence to prove the former statement and the latter statement is just plain subjective and isn't even a great way of putting your feelings for this story. You could have for example written "I found this novel stupid in these ways ...". Putting it that way would show that you in fact may think badly of the novel but that your staments are actually valid and carry weight. Don't take this the wrong way, I'm just trying to give advice😀

Robert_Hay:you're either a complete idiot or you meant to leave this review on a different book. this book is absolute garbage. I think the grammar actually might be the worst part. it's so bad I think a fourth grader could do a better job. did you actually read this? I tried, but I simply refuse to continue past chapter 155. this book is a waste of time. it seems like it might get better, but it's only leading you on. the quality is egregious in almost every way. it's just stupid.
Monarchofchaos
MonarchofchaosLv2

Can there be more then 1 release on the novel a day please. Like 2. Ones not enough 😭😭

DiceVR:I would love to, but I sadly can't with this novel. However, I am working on a new novel that I would be able to put out there in different forms (also, without going premium on here)
Chepi_1
Chepi_1Lv4

in a way

Adel_Quinn:does he ever evolve from a imp into something like a greater demon?
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