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Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv144yr
2020-01-23 06:46

Another sht monster mc novel. Came to read monster mc but all this story is so far, is that the mc is being mind controlled, a slave and pet. Something that annoys about this is how everyone is loving the humans when they make a slave outta the mc. In the comments everyone says he is being treaded nice etc but this is the most dumb thing I have seen. Thyere being nice ? They are going to SELL him ? They treat him nice to get more money when they sell him. can go on but already said loads in the comments xD Something that annoys me in monster novels is that they authors are all human superiority. I wanted to read this novel bc he is NOT human. Not so you can just make him human later on, a hybrid of human and beast etc Dunno about the rest of the story but from what I have read it is an alright start made terrible. If your into the mc being pet/slave then good for you and might be worth the read. If looking for a pure monster mc story then dont bother. gl to author, bye

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DiceVR
DiceVRAuthor

Well, thanks for the very constructive criticism, but I'm just going to tell you, and this is a Spoiler, that you will see he won't be a Pet/Slave anymore literally 7 Chapters from now :)

Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv14

Ill re read and see how it is up to there then. As long as he isnt a pet/slave then all good. One thing thou, is he going to be human later on ? If so... oh also will he have a human mentality etc treating all humans before his kind ? Finally Similar to the second one is it monster's his race first or always on the humans side ? Always hated it how a monster mc doesnt think about how his kind are hunted for food, bodyparts, cores etc. Like think about the babies of his kind etc but then always forgives humans who hunted them etc of that makes sense ?

DiceVR:Well, thanks for the very constructive criticism, but I'm just going to tell you, and this is a Spoiler, that you will see he won't be a Pet/Slave anymore literally 7 Chapters from now :)
DiceVR
DiceVRAuthor

He's never going to become a human, he will always stay a monster. And he's neither on the side of Humans nor Monsters, it might seem that he is on the Humans' side because he doesn't attack any Human that he sees. As long as they're chill toward him, he's chill toward them, that's basically his mentality for the most part

Aeternabilis:Ill re read and see how it is up to there then. As long as he isnt a pet/slave then all good. One thing thou, is he going to be human later on ? If so... oh also will he have a human mentality etc treating all humans before his kind ? Finally Similar to the second one is it monster's his race first or always on the humans side ? Always hated it how a monster mc doesnt think about how his kind are hunted for food, bodyparts, cores etc. Like think about the babies of his kind etc but then always forgives humans who hunted them etc of that makes sense ?
ClockWork746
ClockWork746Lv11

Try chrisalis

Devilnote
DevilnoteLv1

Try Evil Goddess System

Dumb_Desert_Goat
Dumb_Desert_GoatLv15

Now that is a monster NOVEL!!!!

ClockWork746:Try chrisalis
NeedCoinsCantRead
NeedCoinsCantReadLv2

That shit makes you addicted faster than crack

ClockWork746:Try chrisalis
swordzero
swordzeroLv6

since you have read read the novel is it worth reading? what you expect from the novel is the what I also want.

Aeternabilis:Ill re read and see how it is up to there then. As long as he isnt a pet/slave then all good. One thing thou, is he going to be human later on ? If so... oh also will he have a human mentality etc treating all humans before his kind ? Finally Similar to the second one is it monster's his race first or always on the humans side ? Always hated it how a monster mc doesnt think about how his kind are hunted for food, bodyparts, cores etc. Like think about the babies of his kind etc but then always forgives humans who hunted them etc of that makes sense ?
Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv14

Well I can't rly remember the story but up to where I read I clearly disliked it and wouldn't recommend it if you wanted a monster novel. However, saying that the author mentions in his reply that those things won't happen. I stopped reading this so I can't say if I would recommend it or not if the author did indeed do those things. I would suggest seeing other reviews to see. Overall from what I can remember and up to where I read, I wouldn't read this. Up to you in the end. In the comments of this, there are good recommendations I would suggest for monster mc's

swordzero:since you have read read the novel is it worth reading? what you expect from the novel is the what I also want.
swordzero
swordzeroLv6

alright I guess i'll give it shot and hope the novel is to my liking, thanks.

Aeternabilis:Well I can't rly remember the story but up to where I read I clearly disliked it and wouldn't recommend it if you wanted a monster novel. However, saying that the author mentions in his reply that those things won't happen. I stopped reading this so I can't say if I would recommend it or not if the author did indeed do those things. I would suggest seeing other reviews to see. Overall from what I can remember and up to where I read, I wouldn't read this. Up to you in the end. In the comments of this, there are good recommendations I would suggest for monster mc's
Rickar_Sanz
Rickar_SanzLv1

monster pacifist. it becomes a friend of humans and never will kill human after 150 page

maelvoid_2025
maelvoid_2025Lv4

You should try demon monarch system and custom made demon king if you haven't already. There both amazing books that I'll give 10/10 as a whole since they have great world building and character development as well as story progression.

4Dsushi
4DsushiLv4

if the mc were to react as u do to slavery, wouldn't that make him human? u dont seem to actually want a monster mc. maybe it would benefit u to search for op mc or evil mc?

BingeReader420
BingeReader420Lv14

Cap.

Rickar_Sanz:monster pacifist. it becomes a friend of humans and never will kill human after 150 page
chanmam20
chanmam20Lv15

this is the problem with reviews.. you give it a low rating just cause its something you don't like to read.. its pointless to bring someones work down cause its not your cup of tea

FantasyMan
FantasyManLv14

Yea but they messed his mind now hes not a “demon” anymore. Even now he still isnt one

DiceVR:Well, thanks for the very constructive criticism, but I'm just going to tell you, and this is a Spoiler, that you will see he won't be a Pet/Slave anymore literally 7 Chapters from now :)
PED_9390
PED_9390Lv2

it gets a lot better right now it's basically like a tutorial it gets better but since you already have a dislike for the novel from the get-go you might not enjoy it as much as you should.

FalseProphet_
FalseProphet_Lv14

Slavery isn't something invented by humans in fantasy worlds at least

4Dsushi:if the mc were to react as u do to slavery, wouldn't that make him human? u dont seem to actually want a monster mc. maybe it would benefit u to search for op mc or evil mc?
Eye_of_Wolf
Eye_of_WolfLv15

he kills a human, then mercy kills another in like, the first twenty chapters. as someone who has read this, he is not a pacifist.

Rickar_Sanz:monster pacifist. it becomes a friend of humans and never will kill human after 150 page
Demelios
DemeliosLv14

You should just delete this comment. He clearly didn't even try to read further.

DiceVR:Well, thanks for the very constructive criticism, but I'm just going to tell you, and this is a Spoiler, that you will see he won't be a Pet/Slave anymore literally 7 Chapters from now :)
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