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2021-01-23 17:18

It would have been perfect for me if the mc didn't have *** with his subordinate (Sofia) but to an outside instead like one night stand. It just gives very bad taste to me.😒 Specially Sofia is not an insignificant character she's one of the main characters that'll grow alongside the mc and not just side character who have only little part in the story. 😕😑

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bitchlasagna
bitchlasagnaLv3

dude you;re too quick to judge, just keep reading(on your own volition) and you'll find out what character development is

Fachi
FachiLv1

It's called uh, setting up a relationship while also showing readers that the MC won't be some shounen protagonist

Fachi
FachiLv1

But thanks for the small spoiler, while I love Fang Yuan and Reverend Insanity his character type of having zero connection to characters makes it a little boring for me

Fachi:It's called uh, setting up a relationship while also showing readers that the MC won't be some shounen protagonist
Blabla_Bla
Blabla_BlaLv1

u dare talk about FY

Fachi:But thanks for the small spoiler, while I love Fang Yuan and Reverend Insanity his character type of having zero connection to characters makes it a little boring for me
sadeggwhite
sadeggwhiteLv2

wait so is there romance in this then?

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