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GashGrunt
GashGruntLv35yr
2020-04-28 08:30

The story is fine nothing special. this is my experience from the frist 35 chapters. the mc is a man who died 2 times 1st time high tech world where he got his chip 2nd where he became a demon lord. He rencartenated again this time has a mage who is now trying to become strong. Characters mc strong demon man with special chip that take him from power level 1 to 50 in a single chapter, knows a lot don't need learn anything. Slave boy, was a beat up assaian boy mc found who wants to find freedom by losing it right away by joining the mc Annoying girl, speical girl who had expierment on making her very ugly untill the mc does ritual on her fixing her. World. not much given there is 3 kingdoms in the human world, and each plane has it's will.

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Fadixx_Fadifaid
Fadixx_FadifaidLv2

Really? Is it related to warlock of the magus world.

Mister_Op
Mister_OpLv5

No

Fadixx_Fadifaid:Really? Is it related to warlock of the magus world.
Xristodoulos_K22
Xristodoulos_K22Lv2

i disagree the mc doesn't get strong that fast it takes him years to go up a rank in the latest chapters

Coldcharm
ColdcharmLv4

nm

AutoChaos
AutoChaosLv13

lol its a rip off from warlok in magis world lmao. Nothing original than.

Fuhong_Ji
Fuhong_JiLv15

First of all wmw is a ripoff from the wizard world. Also while there are elements that are similar the mc is much better with his scheming mind.

AutoChaos:lol its a rip off from warlok in magis world lmao. Nothing original than.
AutoChaos
AutoChaosLv13

WMW is much better than WW .

Fuhong_Ji:First of all wmw is a ripoff from the wizard world. Also while there are elements that are similar the mc is much better with his scheming mind.
FACE_IS_LAUGHING
FACE_IS_LAUGHINGLv2

Yeah he is not strong from the start, he knows how to improve himself but HR IS NOT THE STRONNGEST BECAUSE HE DIED BC OF THAT EXISTENCE. He can't overcome it. 😂

Fuhong_Ji
Fuhong_JiLv15

I’m not saying it’s not but WMW does come from WW

AutoChaos:WMW is much better than WW .
Jay_8793
Jay_8793Lv11

Take him from level 1 to 50 in a chapter? I've read until chapter 200 and I have to say that he is still rank 3! His progress is slow and well planned and he still encounters problems. He isn't as op as other MCs and his companions can still fight by his side. He still tires and gets injured a lot. And the girl is annoying how? terrible review from you.

Jay_8793
Jay_8793Lv11

Exactly, I'm at chapter 200 and he is still rank 3. the speed does not bother me at all.

Xristodoulos_K22:i disagree the mc doesn't get strong that fast it takes him years to go up a rank in the latest chapters
Jay_8793
Jay_8793Lv11

It's better than wmw.

AutoChaos:lol its a rip off from warlok in magis world lmao. Nothing original than.
agentbinex73
agentbinex73Lv4

not helpful review. too vague.

Demi_Scribe
Demi_ScribeLv4

Nope it's not bruh,I think I should read. Bit further before commenting

AutoChaos:lol its a rip off from warlok in magis world lmao. Nothing original than.
LordofRavens
LordofRavensLv5

Duh, of course wmw is better than ww because it came after. It took the best parts of ww and threw away the rest.

AutoChaos:WMW is much better than WW .
Lukus_Lyon
Lukus_LyonLv1

I mean..the later parts of WMW blatantly stole from the lore of D&D lore of it's deities, specifically Faerun so...if anyone else copies WMW that shouldn't be a problem

Pengais_Dollar
Pengais_DollarLv3

scheming mind? he like to share secret with others , if the mc unlucky and meet a paranoid guy the story will end there without plot armor

Fuhong_Ji:First of all wmw is a ripoff from the wizard world. Also while there are elements that are similar the mc is much better with his scheming mind.
Fuhong_Ji
Fuhong_JiLv15

How far have you read? Because the core literally lets him control all other of his kind so what if he tells them stuff not like the primarchs can't find out everything he does in the magi world anyway. And all the schemes with the Beta world, the divine war and everything else, how is it less scheming than warlock in hte magi world?

Pengais_Dollar:scheming mind? he like to share secret with others , if the mc unlucky and meet a paranoid guy the story will end there without plot armor
Pengais_Dollar
Pengais_DollarLv3

He not only share secret to neo-demon but also with others, how can rank 2 being know info about other world? demon?resurection spell?origin runemaster? law? etc.. just that simple info is enough for someone to be suspicious and using divination spell to know about his origin

Fuhong_Ji:How far have you read? Because the core literally lets him control all other of his kind so what if he tells them stuff not like the primarchs can't find out everything he does in the magi world anyway. And all the schemes with the Beta world, the divine war and everything else, how is it less scheming than warlock in hte magi world?
Fuhong_Ji
Fuhong_JiLv15

We’l first of all the ones that matter all become neodemon later on anyway. Also if he didn’t then he’d be sacrificing his own progress for something that’ll eventually be known anyway. Those who know divination won’t know his real origins and even the rank 9 primarch magus can only see that he is special but can’t find his origin so…l

Pengais_Dollar:He not only share secret to neo-demon but also with others, how can rank 2 being know info about other world? demon?resurection spell?origin runemaster? law? etc.. just that simple info is enough for someone to be suspicious and using divination spell to know about his origin
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