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BobbyCSB
BobbyCSBLv132yr
2022-01-09 20:34

Overall, this is your stereotypical 'System' based story where the MC relies on the 'System' as their crutch to develop and grow in power. Nevermind that the MC has reincarnated twice and have reached lofty heights in one of his previous lives. The MC is thoroughly reliant on that crutch instead of using his previous experience to get stronger, the MC is painfully immature to the point that you think he wasn't in any position by a servant in his previous lives. I cannot recommend this story despite so many 'glowing' reviews to it. Most of these reviews are just pandering and toe kissing with lack of any substance on why the story deserves its 5 Stars. You want my input? Here. Character Development : 2/5 Story Grounding : 2/5 World Building : 3/5 Sub-Plot & Arching Plot : 2/5 Conclusion: Worth the read only if you have nothing else to read. Or read if you find the story interesting to you. Seriously, leave actual reviews in Author/WebNovel staff. I am appalled that there is a distinct lack of proper reviews from the masses.

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Bankai_1234
Bankai_1234Lv11

I'm not sure you read this book he doesn't even have a system

BobbyCSB
BobbyCSBLv13

I actually did. You should read it.

Bankai_1234:I'm not sure you read this book he doesn't even have a system
Bankai_1234
Bankai_1234Lv11

he has an AI chip that analysis data not a system

Bankai_1234
Bankai_1234Lv11

all I can say is your missing out bruv

BobbyCSB
BobbyCSBLv13

An AI Chip that analyzes IS A SYSTEM. What are you on about?

Bankai_1234:he has an AI chip that analysis data not a system
Corbog
CorbogLv1

Wouldn’t he act like a completely different person every time he would accept thousands of years worth of memories and experience from his previous life just like the first time and at least grow as a person but that never seems to happen, quite a static character.

bigbeeboyhere
bigbeeboyhereLv3

no, it isn't. There aren't any quests he has to do, there aren't any rewards for reaching certain milestones. All he has is the equivalent of an analysis skill which cannot be compared to a system, period.

BobbyCSB:An AI Chip that analyzes IS A SYSTEM. What are you on about?
BobbyCSB
BobbyCSBLv13

Sir, a skill that analyzes and thus provides him answers as well as previous experience to overcome challenges is a system. Period. /ˈsɪstəm/ / a set of things working together as parts of a mechanism or an interconnecting network; a complex whole.

bigbeeboyhere:no, it isn't. There aren't any quests he has to do, there aren't any rewards for reaching certain milestones. All he has is the equivalent of an analysis skill which cannot be compared to a system, period.
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