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LordofRavens5dCommentedShouldn't his next bottleneck be at the peak of the 6th layer?
After reaching the Middle Phase of Qi Refinement, you need to solve formations to break through the bottleneck of the Heaven Yan Jue, which is also a major threshold.- LordofRavens6dCommented
First grade, not second.
To be able to blast a Second-Grade mid-phase beast, with such formidable physical strength, to the brink of death... - LordofRavens6dReplied to Dreamstrafe
That seems to be wine flavored vodka, which doesn't really count as wine. Vodka which had a higher alcohol content would cause that burning sensation.
This chapter has been deleted. - LordofRavens7dReplied to Dreamstrafe
Not wine, it doesn't have enough alcohol content to cause that burning sensation.
This chapter has been deleted. - LordofRavens14dCommented
As his father, he really should know if his son is eleven or twelve years old.
And Mo Hua was only eleven or twelve years old, which showed he almost devoted all his available time to learning formations. While other children were still complaining about cultivating and thinking about where to play every day, Mo Hua was learning formations day and night. - LordofRavens21dCommented
Weren't his clothes blue? the title of the last chapter was "The man in blue clothes".
The man in green regained his composure and silently swore to himself that he wouldn't show off when there was no need to do so next time. - LordofRavens22dCommented
Reached his heart? I guess the humans of that world are built different then us.
This chapter has been deleted. - LordofRavens26dCommented
That seems weird to me that no one wanted an abundant, free food. Plus 99% of the time pine nuts are used as a part of a dish and not just eaten on their own. (Although they are good on their own as a snack.)
There were all kinds of pine trees in the mountains outside Tongxian City, and pine nuts were plentiful but not filling, so no one wanted them. - LordofRavens1mthReplied to Joao_Pires
No, the shop owner still has the 10 spirit stones as the deposit which is why the MC took the paper, ink, AND 6 spirit stones.
Earning six Spirit Stones in five days was already comparable to the income of an average mid-to-late Qi Refinement Realm cultivator. - LordofRavens1mthReplied to Death_Simulation
Why does the guy on the cover have three hands? His right hand is holding a sword behind his head, his left hand is holding the girl, while his other right hand is also holding the girl up, and it seems to be growing out of his hip or groin area. Is this explained in the story or was it just a cool picture to use as a book cover?
- LordofRavens2mthPosted
It's my book, so of course it's 5-stars. I'm not a "You dare" or "You're courting death" every other chapter writer. I prefer to have slow ride with world building instead of the "you made me feel bad, now I'm going to murder the tens-of-thousands of people in your clan" type of writer. I think I have a good idea for a story and will try to put it to paper like how I see it in my brain. Hope you like it.
- LordofRavens2mthCommentedCh 611 Question
- LordofRavens3mthCommentedCh 610 In A Pinch
- LordofRavens3mthCommentedCh 609 The Shadowbane Staler
- LordofRavens3mthCommentedCh 608 New World
- LordofRavens3mthCommentedCh 607 Descent And Worship
- LordofRavens3mthReplied to Novaburn4972
He should still have the flying sword he got from his book; you know, the one that uses his poison qi.
My hoverboard's jet thrusters would have been more than enough to carry us out of here, but the heavy disturbance of Qi inside this gorge was just too much for any Qi object, tool, or spell to function. So we had to do it the good old way. Makeshift parachutes out of our own robes and the spare ones in our possession. - LordofRavens3mthCommentedCh 606 Into the gorge
- LordofRavens3mthReplied to LordofRavensCh 605 Sheng Huo Ghost