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2022-08-11 02:22

overall 3/10 wouldn't recommend. Some light spoilers. I have read it to about 588. Writer is willing to come up with a lot of new ideas but he refuses to define them, it's very annoying, for example when he/his pets get a skill his useless phone doesn't explane what they are they, he leaves them ambiguous to define them later as to what the situation needs. He gets a weird letter from his stepmother's father, he doesn't discuss it with her, why? no reason, later he finds out that he (his step mom's father) is stuck somewhere and his step mother is going to a dangerous place to find him, she asks the MC if her father left anything with him, he says no, why? nobody knows, does he even try to figure it out? NO, IT HAS BEEN MORETHAN 400 CHAPTERS! CMON MANNNNN. sorry I lost my self. the dialogue between the MC and the other characters is lacking a lot, for example when any character becomes a little bit more rational and starts to think and ask good questions the writer decides to shut them up with "sense they didn't tell me I can't ask them" line, like Huhh? it's just lazy and annoying. and jäk's arc was so irrational, brainless, stupid and trying too hard, he is an evil man he doesn't abide by laws and kills people left and right on a whim, with a lot of difficulty we were able to capure him and imprison him, now let's cut him a deal if he can capture a 16 year's old kid at the legendary stage and bring him over we will let him be free again to kill more people and cause chaos in this chaotic world. Lastly, why does no one question the MC's powers? they all treat it as a given, I think they know he is the MC.

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Azunyan
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This is going to have spoilers for up to ch 17. Go away if you don't want to be spoiled. GENERAL SUMMARY:The story begins at a sort of mid point after an event. The MC who is a certified genius at the high school he goes to got beat up by this girl who had no reason to beat him up. (turns out she is his step sister bc his dad is going to marry her mom. He also has a step brother that ain't friendly either) Now the MC discovered that a phone that was stored in their house and forgotten was a relic from ancient ruins that his grandfather helped in excavating. That phone allows him to basically raid dungeons with a game avatar and reviving the avatar only costs a drop of blood. However, all that the avatar collects in the game translates over to reality with benefits. Because of that, the MC keeps on playing that and sleeping so other people think that he got into a slump and gave up on trying. MC obviously proves that he is fine and dandy later on, but somehow no-one seems to be aware of that because his step siblings think he is trash and the other teachers are just unaware. Luckily there isn't too many side character that are rubbish. The step siblings tho... they just suck. OPINION: So I think that this story is worth a read. The MC has an apathy about him that makes him not really care about others except his dad so he sort of just strolls along in life while others seem to care a bit too much about details. However, this makes it really difficult to get a read on the MC, I mean he didn't care that his step brother basically screwed up his chance to be on a really good team for practical examinations. Like the personality of the MC in a phrase would be: calm to the point of being apathetic. The other side characters were reasonable and had common sense in their actions. Step-siblings not really tho. They are just out to make the MC miserable. The general world set up without factions and crap is really similar to shadow hack, modern cultivation stories, and dungeon raiding kind of stories. At a certain point in time, dimensional zones AKA dungeons appeared and monsters came out from those. Humanity adapted to it and now there are special abilities and other cultivation like crap that are present. Currently tho there seems to be no threat of monsters coming out or anything like that. That about wraps up the review.

WN_Enthusiast
WN_EnthusiastLv11

This review is solely my own opinion. People who like these kinna crap usually post their 5 stars. Ppl who don't like it typically just drop the novel without any review. Thats why this kinna garbage gets pretty high ranking in my opinion. So i wanted to share my thoughts for any likeminded individual and/or for whoever cares. I haven't encountered such a spineless, retarded and prideless MC in a while. This dude got no self respect. I read upto ch 87 hoping it would improve but nope. His step sis-to-be comes to his school and beat his ass, his step bro-to-be tries to destroy his future and he is cool with it. He constantly says that he doesn't wanna be dependent on his new family and their status for self improvement but he takes everything they give him. Like EVERYTHING. His step mom marries his useless piece of turd dad to get to him so that he can use him to win something (i won't mention for heavy spoiler), he is fine with it too. His step mom literally tells him i am gonna take care of my own kids (understandable) before you but participate in tourney for me which i already enrolled you in without asking you to win the aforementioned something for my family. How shameless could you be to ask that from a step son who you met not even weeks ago? She didn't even ask his permission before she nominated him for such a dangerous task and his step siblings are vengeful abt it. He didn't reject her either and going by how it has gone so far. He will most likely accept it too. I am in ch 87 and MC hasn't even stepped up one realm. How else could author milk the money if he doesn't unnecessarily lengthen the novel under the guise of world building? Overall this guy is a marvelous little biatch and hypocrite. But go ahead and read if you like these and be your own judge. I am dropping it and i will remember the author to avoid next time.

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