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BrezerLv145yr
2020-02-02 02:46

Little background, this would has a cultivation system of sorts and people kill monsters to loot Crystal's that give stat boosts, qi and skills. Ok the mc funds an old cell phone that has a game that when he plays it it's like el, where when he kills a monster in game and lots a crystal the power comes through the phone and upgrades his body. The start the mc is considered a genius until a new person transfers in and kicks his butt then after the student transfers out, long story short his dad remarries and the new step kids do whatever they can to jack with the mc from kicking his butt to trying to make him not able to get in college. The mc has never met these 2 kids they just do it to be asses. The story seems ok it's nothing too exciting. So for short mc plays a video game to get stronger, dads new kids do everything they can to haze the mc and wreck his life for no reason.

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987jeanjean987Lv4

Please next time put a spoiler alert

BrezerLv14

Actually it's not a spoiler:) but I can if you like. There is a lot more too it but that gives you more of what actually is going on. πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

987jeanjean987:Please next time put a spoiler alert
987jeanjean987Lv4

Well, actually it's not rally necessary it's just that it gives a better idea of what is going on than the synopsis and it killed abit of my hype for this novel but once more it's not a bad thing 'cause now I know what to expect from this novel

Brezer:Actually it's not a spoiler:) but I can if you like. There is a lot more too it but that gives you more of what actually is going on. πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡
BrezerLv14

There is more I can include if you like. I just brushed over the starting overlay, it gets more in depth later, you get what a twist moments a few times and the mc and new family do stupid stuff, if you hate hi why help him.....

987jeanjean987:Well, actually it's not rally necessary it's just that it gives a better idea of what is going on than the synopsis and it killed abit of my hype for this novel but once more it's not a bad thing 'cause now I know what to expect from this novel
Water0202020Lv6

And the dad kept on watching while the 2 step-kids tried to get him off college?

BrezerLv14

Dad is just a stand in figure for the author. He seems clueless of everything literally. The mc never brings up the step kids to his dad which if it was me I would have told the whole group to get fkd. The mc does not act like a regular person at all nor the dad, like I said he only shows up from time to time, plot device maybe. So they can rank up to mythic but only the 6 main families can do this and they do it by combining with a mythic pet. The mc's new stepmother is from one of those families and one of her children is supposed to inherit the mythical standing but for some reason she finds out about the mc and wants to give the mythical standing to him instead of her kids so she marries the dad then forces the daughter to give up the right for the mythic spot. The mc doesn't know any of this and the sister attacks him to prove she is better which she was legendary status and he was regular so ya he gets an ass whoopin. Then the mc later wants to enter college and has to join a team to try and qualify, the new stepbrother intimidates the teammates to drop him and the last minute he gets a new team and gets qualified to go to college.

Water0202020:And the dad kept on watching while the 2 step-kids tried to get him off college?
Water0202020Lv6

Is it harem?

BrezerLv14

Not as far as i went, no romance at all

Water0202020:Is it harem?
Rlopdsr12Lv1

i found a novel named Wasurerarenai bōken and theres also Story Of Legends those books are great

EvilWolfLv12

what a trash novel soo people can find out abut secrets like they are common knowledge and how tf does he get beat up all the time when he has a cheat so hes trash

SakuseiLv4

When was he beaten after the cheat, that didn't happen. It only happened when he still didn't get the phone

EvilWolf:what a trash novel soo people can find out abut secrets like they are common knowledge and how tf does he get beat up all the time when he has a cheat so hes trash
SakuseiLv4

When was he beaten after the cheat, that didn't happen. It only happened when he still didn't get the phone

EvilWolf:what a trash novel soo people can find out abut secrets like they are common knowledge and how tf does he get beat up all the time when he has a cheat so hes trash
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AzunyanLv6

This is going to have spoilers for up to ch 17. Go away if you don't want to be spoiled. GENERAL SUMMARY:The story begins at a sort of mid point after an event. The MC who is a certified genius at the high school he goes to got beat up by this girl who had no reason to beat him up. (turns out she is his step sister bc his dad is going to marry her mom. He also has a step brother that ain't friendly either) Now the MC discovered that a phone that was stored in their house and forgotten was a relic from ancient ruins that his grandfather helped in excavating. That phone allows him to basically raid dungeons with a game avatar and reviving the avatar only costs a drop of blood. However, all that the avatar collects in the game translates over to reality with benefits. Because of that, the MC keeps on playing that and sleeping so other people think that he got into a slump and gave up on trying. MC obviously proves that he is fine and dandy later on, but somehow no-one seems to be aware of that because his step siblings think he is trash and the other teachers are just unaware. Luckily there isn't too many side character that are rubbish. The step siblings tho... they just suck. OPINION: So I think that this story is worth a read. The MC has an apathy about him that makes him not really care about others except his dad so he sort of just strolls along in life while others seem to care a bit too much about details. However, this makes it really difficult to get a read on the MC, I mean he didn't care that his step brother basically screwed up his chance to be on a really good team for practical examinations. Like the personality of the MC in a phrase would be: calm to the point of being apathetic. The other side characters were reasonable and had common sense in their actions. Step-siblings not really tho. They are just out to make the MC miserable. The general world set up without factions and crap is really similar to shadow hack, modern cultivation stories, and dungeon raiding kind of stories. At a certain point in time, dimensional zones AKA dungeons appeared and monsters came out from those. Humanity adapted to it and now there are special abilities and other cultivation like crap that are present. Currently tho there seems to be no threat of monsters coming out or anything like that. That about wraps up the review.

WN_EnthusiastLv11

This review is solely my own opinion. People who like these kinna crap usually post their 5 stars. Ppl who don't like it typically just drop the novel without any review. Thats why this kinna garbage gets pretty high ranking in my opinion. So i wanted to share my thoughts for any likeminded individual and/or for whoever cares. I haven't encountered such a spineless, retarded and prideless MC in a while. This dude got no self respect. I read upto ch 87 hoping it would improve but nope. His step sis-to-be comes to his school and beat his ass, his step bro-to-be tries to destroy his future and he is cool with it. He constantly says that he doesn't wanna be dependent on his new family and their status for self improvement but he takes everything they give him. Like EVERYTHING. His step mom marries his useless piece of turd dad to get to him so that he can use him to win something (i won't mention for heavy spoiler), he is fine with it too. His step mom literally tells him i am gonna take care of my own kids (understandable) before you but participate in tourney for me which i already enrolled you in without asking you to win the aforementioned something for my family. How shameless could you be to ask that from a step son who you met not even weeks ago? She didn't even ask his permission before she nominated him for such a dangerous task and his step siblings are vengeful abt it. He didn't reject her either and going by how it has gone so far. He will most likely accept it too. I am in ch 87 and MC hasn't even stepped up one realm. How else could author milk the money if he doesn't unnecessarily lengthen the novel under the guise of world building? Overall this guy is a marvelous little biatch and hypocrite. But go ahead and read if you like these and be your own judge. I am dropping it and i will remember the author to avoid next time.

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