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FigShiggitty
FigShiggittyLv45yr
2019-10-08 10:09

Warning: Do not use your brain while reading, not doing so may lead to a noticeable loss of brain cells. Please be advice. So to begin we have the Mcs personality, which is honestly irritating and has the intelligence of a 9 year old. I mean he always goes on and on about he is so weak and must kill to avoid future threats. Then not 2 chapters later, he gave 2 girls; who I may add, he had only met a couple of weeks ago and had also literally stated MULTIPLE times that they don't trust him. HE now gives them a power up that has a potential to kill him and had also revealed his secret; that if discovered, would honestly have the whole world after him in order to obtain his knowledge. Yea be revealed this type of info to one of the girls, who if I may add again and please do forgive my french, SELLS F*CKING INFORMATION FOR A LIVING! Yes for a living, he told a girl who he clearly did not trust and sells info, a world wide secret ... I... 😤😪... It is already too late for me, my brain has already taken too big of a hit from reading this. I can only hope that my sacrifice won't be in vain and that I can stop others from making the same mistake as I did... RIP loli in disguise 1595-2019

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Orademo
OrademoAuthor

It still isn't a reason to give 1 star, you clearly have repressed anger you need to let of.

FigShiggitty
FigShiggittyLv4

The reason being is that webnovel won't allow me to rate it at -5; if you had expected more from me, then clearly you are in delusion, you need to wake up from.

Orademo:It still isn't a reason to give 1 star, you clearly have repressed anger you need to let of.
Orademo
OrademoAuthor

Being able to write doesn't mean you have to, while I receive complaints no one is like you, they offer suggestions and support, you just offer enmity and baseless criticism on things I clearly explained in the story. I will no longer bother with you because there are a lot of people worth listening to. Bye

FigShiggitty:The reason being is that webnovel won't allow me to rate it at -5; if you had expected more from me, then clearly you are in delusion, you need to wake up from.
FigShiggitty
FigShiggittyLv4

First of all, I'm wasnt dissuading anyone from reading this, I'm simply warning them about the potential of losing brain cell if they were to read this. Also you want a suggestion? Its there, in my review, your just salty about it not being as polite as some of the others. So let me make it clearer for you. The lead character just embodies hypocrisy, naivety and most of all stupidabililinity; All unlikable and irritating traits. You want that to change? Then show some character developments, the best way of doing that would be for Robin to betray him and him losing a limb for his mistake. Cuz as you have said "If he becomes overconfident, then no one can be blame but himself, if he dies." But sadly I don't see this happening in a harem novel. And as much as I would love to stay tune for any potential developments later on, you have already lost me and maybe a few more readers due to the irritating nature of the lead character. But who knows, maybe you can pull of an [overgeared] and make this hot pile of mess into a magnum opus, time will tell.

Orademo:Being able to write doesn't mean you have to, while I receive complaints no one is like you, they offer suggestions and support, you just offer enmity and baseless criticism on things I clearly explained in the story. I will no longer bother with you because there are a lot of people worth listening to. Bye
TheMothMan
TheMothManLv5

Oh so overgeared turns into a good novel later on huh i read the first 5-10 chapters and vomited blood got my foundation ruined which lead to qi deviation which lead to my dantian collapsing upon itself leaving me barely alive and as a crippled mortal who will never be able to chew again or wipe his ow ass and I'll probably meet Yama in a couple of months but my soul got damaged too so i will not be able to reincarnate into a human and therefore no new world for me no new system no harem I'll have to start over as a plant cultivating my soul to greater heights so even though it all went to **** there is still light at the end of the tunnel.

FigShiggitty:First of all, I'm wasnt dissuading anyone from reading this, I'm simply warning them about the potential of losing brain cell if they were to read this. Also you want a suggestion? Its there, in my review, your just salty about it not being as polite as some of the others. So let me make it clearer for you. The lead character just embodies hypocrisy, naivety and most of all stupidabililinity; All unlikable and irritating traits. You want that to change? Then show some character developments, the best way of doing that would be for Robin to betray him and him losing a limb for his mistake. Cuz as you have said "If he becomes overconfident, then no one can be blame but himself, if he dies." But sadly I don't see this happening in a harem novel. And as much as I would love to stay tune for any potential developments later on, you have already lost me and maybe a few more readers due to the irritating nature of the lead character. But who knows, maybe you can pull of an [overgeared] and make this hot pile of mess into a magnum opus, time will tell.
FigShiggitty
FigShiggittyLv4

Yea bro, overgeared is amazing later on, if you haven't read it all then your missing out. Also yes, I agree with you, the first 80 chapters or so, was... horrible, no doubt about that. But it was all done to show an outstanding character development. I suggest you read the manga first, then skim through the chapters till you read the apart about a world wide competition. Cuz after that, the novel only goes uphill from there.

TheMothMan:Oh so overgeared turns into a good novel later on huh i read the first 5-10 chapters and vomited blood got my foundation ruined which lead to qi deviation which lead to my dantian collapsing upon itself leaving me barely alive and as a crippled mortal who will never be able to chew again or wipe his ow ass and I'll probably meet Yama in a couple of months but my soul got damaged too so i will not be able to reincarnate into a human and therefore no new world for me no new system no harem I'll have to start over as a plant cultivating my soul to greater heights so even though it all went to **** there is still light at the end of the tunnel.
NulZilch
NulZilchLv5

Lol, -5. Yeah the MC is just nice guy self insert IMO. His crew would be filled with slave harem while he'll keep on spouting how he did what he did for justice, morals and pure philanthropy. He left a full island of slaves and saved just one slave which just happens to be a girl. He was thinking of having haki while he just gave away his pills to girl because he wants to get inside theur pussy, lol. Also that slave girl is somehow in MC crew without even talking to MC. Waaa... Why? *Jackie chan confusion meme*

FigShiggitty:The reason being is that webnovel won't allow me to rate it at -5; if you had expected more from me, then clearly you are in delusion, you need to wake up from.
Heroy
HeroyLv12

I am one of them. The begining are a least average. But After thinking to talk about thé system. The quality extremely drop. No power scale and logic.with a MC who is a coldblood killer who just thinking about killing are the best solution. Amnesia are After where i have read very dump. Could make something more good. But for now i Lost some brain and my mind are rpe.

Orademo:Being able to write doesn't mean you have to, while I receive complaints no one is like you, they offer suggestions and support, you just offer enmity and baseless criticism on things I clearly explained in the story. I will no longer bother with you because there are a lot of people worth listening to. Bye
God_of_Perverts
God_of_PervertsLv5

I've never read Overgeared, but if the first 10 chapters made you feel that way, I dread trying to read it.

TheMothMan:Oh so overgeared turns into a good novel later on huh i read the first 5-10 chapters and vomited blood got my foundation ruined which lead to qi deviation which lead to my dantian collapsing upon itself leaving me barely alive and as a crippled mortal who will never be able to chew again or wipe his ow ass and I'll probably meet Yama in a couple of months but my soul got damaged too so i will not be able to reincarnate into a human and therefore no new world for me no new system no harem I'll have to start over as a plant cultivating my soul to greater heights so even though it all went to **** there is still light at the end of the tunnel.
TheMothMan
TheMothManLv5

Keep in mind that I have mildly exaggerated my condition.

God_of_Perverts:I've never read Overgeared, but if the first 10 chapters made you feel that way, I dread trying to read it.
jblack4
jblack4Lv3

read "one piece soul purchasing pirate" its the best fanfic I have ever read seriously. you will definitely like it

Sage_of_Anarchy
Sage_of_AnarchyLv3

Pull an overgeared you say

FigShiggitty:First of all, I'm wasnt dissuading anyone from reading this, I'm simply warning them about the potential of losing brain cell if they were to read this. Also you want a suggestion? Its there, in my review, your just salty about it not being as polite as some of the others. So let me make it clearer for you. The lead character just embodies hypocrisy, naivety and most of all stupidabililinity; All unlikable and irritating traits. You want that to change? Then show some character developments, the best way of doing that would be for Robin to betray him and him losing a limb for his mistake. Cuz as you have said "If he becomes overconfident, then no one can be blame but himself, if he dies." But sadly I don't see this happening in a harem novel. And as much as I would love to stay tune for any potential developments later on, you have already lost me and maybe a few more readers due to the irritating nature of the lead character. But who knows, maybe you can pull of an [overgeared] and make this hot pile of mess into a magnum opus, time will tell.
Sage_of_Anarchy
Sage_of_AnarchyLv3

I thought overgeared chapters 1-80 were all amazing. Maybe its just me

FigShiggitty:Yea bro, overgeared is amazing later on, if you haven't read it all then your missing out. Also yes, I agree with you, the first 80 chapters or so, was... horrible, no doubt about that. But it was all done to show an outstanding character development. I suggest you read the manga first, then skim through the chapters till you read the apart about a world wide competition. Cuz after that, the novel only goes uphill from there.
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