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SaikoYonebayashi
SaikoYonebayashiLv115yr
2019-10-13 20:27

The story is good up till now (chap 22) i think. But of course there will be some things that's needed to be improved. The MC for the beginning look like a naive type,but don't worry guys he is improving. Author doing a good job to improve the MC, it's the part of character development so don't worry. It's one of the good One Piece fan fic here. Keep reading and be patient for the first couple chapter,cause it became better with every chapter. Lastly keep up the good work and good luck.

One Piece: Harem King

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4.0
39 Chs

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SaikoYonebayashi
SaikoYonebayashiLv11

Nice review as always saiko-chan~

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FBI_B1TCH
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Contains the type of MC that makes other people stronger before himself, even when they just met and the other person doesn't even trust him... Sorry, but I just don't understand this MC at all lol.

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Royal_Lurkers
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I am the boner of my sword. MC is my body, and harem is my blood. I have created over a thousand woman. Unknown to death, nor known to life. Have withstood pain to satisfy many woman. Yet, those hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray...Unlimited Harem Works!. ---ORIGINAL--- I am the exp of my sword. webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless review. Unknown to death, nor known to life. Have withstood pain to create many reviews. Yet, those hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!.

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FigShiggitty
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Warning: Do not use your brain while reading, not doing so may lead to a noticeable loss of brain cells. Please be advice. So to begin we have the Mcs personality, which is honestly irritating and has the intelligence of a 9 year old. I mean he always goes on and on about he is so weak and must kill to avoid future threats. Then not 2 chapters later, he gave 2 girls; who I may add, he had only met a couple of weeks ago and had also literally stated MULTIPLE times that they don't trust him. HE now gives them a power up that has a potential to kill him and had also revealed his secret; that if discovered, would honestly have the whole world after him in order to obtain his knowledge. Yea be revealed this type of info to one of the girls, who if I may add again and please do forgive my french, SELLS F*CKING INFORMATION FOR A LIVING! Yes for a living, he told a girl who he clearly did not trust and sells info, a world wide secret ... I... 😤😪... It is already too late for me, my brain has already taken too big of a hit from reading this. I can only hope that my sacrifice won't be in vain and that I can stop others from making the same mistake as I did... RIP loli in disguise 1595-2019

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Bro... If you drop this i curse you to not get a boner in this life and all the lifes you will have after this. Great novel till now. More chap. Plz ;)

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StressedByHW
StressedByHWLv4

I love one piece of fan fiction. many(not) say this is good fanfic of one piece but it’s not. You can already tell it’s a horny cause of harem tag so I don’t need to go over that and I’m completely fine with it, but he(mc) decides to not grow stronger by himself and chooses to grow at the same pace as his crew member(harem member or pleasure reliever). I'm not saying it a stupid idea but it's a stupid idea. I'm not saying you should do this but I'm just giving a suggestion that it's stupid

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F*ck 140 character's!!!

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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! loving it plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz dont drop.................................................

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