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2019-12-11 05:06

It is okay. the characters are flat at times, but the way they act to each other is good, they are pretty cool. Also some cool superpowers. It is pretty cool, and I do like it... Not an amazing story, but an interesting one. B

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I feel so weird writing this review because I wanted to like this story. And part of me does like it. But I also f##king hate it lol. Okay let's start off with this. The Arthur isn't really a bad writer. He set up the world really well and it was easy to follow. Killer monsters, people with powers fights them, good guys are Enforcers. Easy. The first half of Volume One is Good. Really good. At least a3.5 or 4 out of 5. And then you get to the rest... So first off. A compliant. It's f##king long. The first half of volume one is good but so stupidly long. The first chapter is nearly 5000 words. F##k. And it gets longer... Also you can tell it's his first story and the writing is meh. That gets better. But the story gets worse. Volume Two is f##ked. Kind of. The final part of volume one, and the first half of volume two feel mega rushed. I feel like he just made s##t up that he thought would be cool. Thankfully the second half of Volume Two was good. Again. Better than volume one. But I don't want to go through s##t to get a semi valuable diamond. Now Volume 3... What? What even is it? I feel like s##t just happens to happen. The lovable characters are gone there's like 15 plots and its just bad. And spoiler so don't read this part if you care about that it ends on a rebbot? It just ends. Hero dies. Story restarts... Why! That's so stupid and so dumb. I hate it. Legit hate it. Not good at all. So Volume 3 has ended and the Arthur has rebooted the entire story. Volume 4 is volume one again but with some changes. And.. It's good. I mean it's a f##king stupid plot point and a mess to get to it, the Volume so far is the best. It as the easy and fun story of Volume One, with the improved writing. It really feels like its own story and not a part of Enforcers? But still Enforcers? Its weird. I'm gonna keep reading because I know the story is good. It just bad also? It's so weird? The comments are a meme and is just off I guess? So heres what I say. Read Volume one, skip 2, and 3, and go straight to 4. By the end of Volume one you'll know if you enjoy these characters or not.

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