webnovel
storm_crow
storm_crowLv25yr
2019-12-08 17:29

This is pretty spoilery as I am gonna talk about Hero, and my thoughts on him. Hello Author-Kun. It's me. Good old fan who has a secret alt account. You'll still never guess who I really am! Hahaha haha evil laugh hahaha. I wanted to do something differently today though. Recently I started posting long detailed chapters on different characters from many other webnovels and since you just posted a chapter about an hour ago, and we are learning a lot about Hero, let's do one on him. So to start off with. I love the character Hero. He is pretty silly, and goofy, which is refreshing considering it has almost been nonstop edgelords, or seriousbillys. So having a down to earth idiot felt fun and new. Also. He has three powers. It has been hammered home several times that a human can only have one. Hero, however, is running around with three that all kind of madh together into the ultimate combo. Thank God for bulls##t main character powers, am I right! But in actuality. Hero having three powers makes dense from a character stand point rather than a naritive stand point. So far the story is an obvious man versus monsters. Man has stupidly cool superpowers. Monsters also have stupidly cool superpowers plus multiple powers, plus a lot more of them. Also. They can evolve like Pokemon, I love the monsters in this series... Anyways. The point is it is man vs monster. Man only has 1 power while monsters have 2 or more. But here's the cool thing. Hero is one of the few with more than one. Apparently, there was some ancient clan blah, blah, experiments and he now has 3 powers. One of the powers is literally called the Monster something something. The point is it has monster in the title! That's ******** and shows that man still can only have 1 power. Because Hero could technically be considered a monster now? Or can he... Let's get names up in here! So Okami Otoko is a mysterious man who we know little about, but we do know he is the grandfather of Hero, has jept Hero locked away from the world for sixteen years resulting in the boy being dumb as s##t, and the man apparently worked on the Enforcers as well, and may of may not be insanely strong. However, what I want to do is look at Okami Otoko. Fun fact. That is a Japanese name. Okami meaning wolf, and Otoko meaning Man. So in a way his name is the Wolf Man. Now considering names are a big part of this story as everyone's name ties itno something about that character Okami/Wolf is likely the man's Power. Probably some wolf based ability. It doesn't really matter. What does matter is Otoko/Man? Hero Otoko would be Hero Man. Man being the key word. Man as in mankind and mankind as in human. By all accounts, Hero is being called a human by his name. But he has the Monster super power. So than what is Hero. A human, or a Monster? I feel like that will be a question that will plague the story later on as it begins to get unraveled. Hero is basically a coin. On one side he is a human. On the other, he is a monster. Inside of Hero's mind we are given three main things. A Hospital, that is also a killer monsters, a flying lab coat that drops blood, and a massive river of red liquid. Weird right? We are actually told by the lab coat several things. One. This isn't the first time Hero has been there so he apparently goes there a lot? Two the Hopsital is obviously his monster side, while the Labcoat claims to have been put there by Doctor Hyde (where's Jekle) so it represents his human side. And the liquid? Well Lab Coat claims it's Hero Mother? I dunno know about it though? The point is two sides. Hero I feel, will be a very interesting character for later on. Or he could just be a random guy and I thought way too much into this as the author could be making up the plot as he goes...

Liked by 26 people

LIKE
Replies1
RainyLiquid2020
RainyLiquid2020Author

Cool long assumption. Somethings were spot on but others I feel like you are giving me way to much credit. As for if I am making the story up alone as I go. Well, I actually have Ten Volumes planed out so far, so, for the most part, I have everything planned out.

Other Reviews
MyMoneymoneymoney
MyMoneymoneymoneyLv1

I feel so weird writing this review because I wanted to like this story. And part of me does like it. But I also f##king hate it lol. Okay let's start off with this. The Arthur isn't really a bad writer. He set up the world really well and it was easy to follow. Killer monsters, people with powers fights them, good guys are Enforcers. Easy. The first half of Volume One is Good. Really good. At least a3.5 or 4 out of 5. And then you get to the rest... So first off. A compliant. It's f##king long. The first half of volume one is good but so stupidly long. The first chapter is nearly 5000 words. F##k. And it gets longer... Also you can tell it's his first story and the writing is meh. That gets better. But the story gets worse. Volume Two is f##ked. Kind of. The final part of volume one, and the first half of volume two feel mega rushed. I feel like he just made s##t up that he thought would be cool. Thankfully the second half of Volume Two was good. Again. Better than volume one. But I don't want to go through s##t to get a semi valuable diamond. Now Volume 3... What? What even is it? I feel like s##t just happens to happen. The lovable characters are gone there's like 15 plots and its just bad. And spoiler so don't read this part if you care about that it ends on a rebbot? It just ends. Hero dies. Story restarts... Why! That's so stupid and so dumb. I hate it. Legit hate it. Not good at all. So Volume 3 has ended and the Arthur has rebooted the entire story. Volume 4 is volume one again but with some changes. And.. It's good. I mean it's a f##king stupid plot point and a mess to get to it, the Volume so far is the best. It as the easy and fun story of Volume One, with the improved writing. It really feels like its own story and not a part of Enforcers? But still Enforcers? Its weird. I'm gonna keep reading because I know the story is good. It just bad also? It's so weird? The comments are a meme and is just off I guess? So heres what I say. Read Volume one, skip 2, and 3, and go straight to 4. By the end of Volume one you'll know if you enjoy these characters or not.

Snidog752
Snidog752Lv3
RobertJohn2000
RobertJohn2000Lv2
mousehider1991
mousehider1991Lv2
Related Stories

My Abilities Come with Special Effects

In the world of dynasties and martial arts, Lin Yan awakened the memories of his past life and struggled to survive with his half-sister. Fortunately, he awakened cheats. As long as the ability proficiency reached 100%, he could sublimate the skill to the extreme and give rise to strange special effects. Swallowing - [Transforming Poison]: Invulnerable to all kinds of poisons, swallowing poisons can be transformed into qi and blood to feed oneself. Five Birds Hand - [Spring Return]: consume qi and blood to recover from injuries Dragon Fist - [Cloud from Dragon]: Ride the wind to swim the dragon, and speed instantly doubled. Mountain Breaking Fist - [Wind from Tiger]: White Tiger breaks the army, and instantly doubles the instant damage. Attack - [Ape God Strike]: The whole body force converges in one point. Defense - [No Phase]: Distribute the attack received evenly to all parts of the body ... A secret realm wrapped in poisonous miasma, where no one could enter without being killed by touching it? I had [Swallowing - Transforming Poison]. I could enter and leave the secret realm at will. The secret medicine must be used to counteract the injury? I had [Five Birds Hand - Spring Return], and I could practice at will without fear. Every special effect was a cheat. The world was in turmoil with demons, the people were like ghosts, the ancient world was revived, and the world would be in chaos. Only with the idea of invincibility, I should open up a path of prosperity, overlooking the nature of the rivers and mountains.

Lin Tuo · Action
3.9
644 Chs

Sword Of Chaos

[Silver Tier Winner For WPC 158- Kingdom Building] Ancient Swords, a sword that possesses the power and potential to surpass higher beings that are stronger than Gods. Due to the threat it causes, all Ancient Swords are besieged by the Semi-Supreme Beings (beings who are almost omnipotent). That incident caused all of the Ancient Swords to be fragmented into hundreds of thousands of pieces and scattered throughout the multiverse. Even the strongest Ancient Swords which are The Sword Of Chaos and The Sword Of Origin weren't able to win against the Semi-Supreme Beings. The original counterpart of Chaos, the Sword Of Chaos, is wielded by the weakest swordsman and after 10,000 years have passed, both of them became the strongest existence in the God Realm. A lot of Supreme Gods coveted the power of the Sword Of Chaos so all of those Supreme Gods ganged up against Chaos and his wielder until Chaos and his wielder perished in the battle. Ancient Swords can't die so instead of dying, Chaos finds himself in a cave with nothing other than his power to wield Chaos itself. His Knowledge? Most of his memories are sealed by a higher being! Cultivation Base? His life was saved, not his cultivation base. Thus, he has to start everything from scratch with only his chaos sword forms as his cheat. "My previous wielder and I didn't lack power but instead, allies! So, I will create my kingdom, the entire realm as my palace! Those Supreme Gods better not get senile or they will not know what kills them!" ... Author: ShadowKatake Discord Link: https://discord.gg/xymuEWjYK5

ShadowKatake · Action
4.8
164 Chs