The short bio made it sound like something which had potential to become one of my new favorites, sadly I once again got proven that a novel having an interesting concept isn't all. Let's start off by saying that I don't think all the blame lies with the translation but mostly with the original writing, there's bad jokes, weird dynamic between core characters and situations which seem very forced. What is on the translation however is the constant usage of certain words that constantly repeat, almost to the point of becoming more than painful. The world background that's given is just enough to create some kind of image to form but personally I feel that it isn't fleshed out enough after 60 chapters. As I said before the general concept and the cheat he gets after transmigrating is actually quite interesting, enough is explained and achieved with it that it kept my interest for the full 60 trial chapters but I can't help having to read past the obvious glaring issues which I mentioned before. I might continue to read it if it gets through the voting round just to see where the cheat leads to. But also to see if there's any improvement in the writing after a few hundred chapters (If the Author is even committed enough for that). It won't be one of my new favorites but I'll be sure to check in once in awhile if I have nothing to read. If it doesn't get through voting I don't really care.
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Agree, but I sorta think the translation is more at fault. Reading is rough, at some points you aren't really sure what just happened, feels like a few words were missing.
