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noBiggie
noBiggieLv154yr
2020-04-11 22:27

Felt like readers are being herded to this by editors choice mark on trail read. And all the 5 star reviews. Don’t be mistaken, this novel is absolutely struggling to reach mediocre and escape from trash label. It’s not completely trash, u can read it as last resort in isolation. I mean you could be doing ANYTHING productive, but u can read this too. Ok, reasons: pairing up bro and sis? Ok, not blood related, but we’re grown up like them till his 18th bday. When parents are the ones pushing them together? No thanks. 2000 hrs in future, humans went galactic. And Chinese brought the cultural baggage with them all the way? The humour is not completely humour. Because it’s a Chinese novel trying to be Japanese with its strong mother, henpecked dad, beta MC, and Chinese elements. I rated it all 1 because the novel is rated too high for its worth and it needs to be brought down.

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Forbidsin
ForbidsinLv12

I actually agree with the bro and sis comment u made. Thats it doe. Im still mad happy that it got picked so we gonna get more. But that first point u made is so fact its almost stopping me from reading despite me liking everything else

noBiggie
noBiggieLv15

No, I just want to adjust it’s rating. Like for a 4.7 rated novel, I would expect something fresh and good.

Forbidsin:I actually agree with the bro and sis comment u made. Thats it doe. Im still mad happy that it got picked so we gonna get more. But that first point u made is so fact its almost stopping me from reading despite me liking everything else
Aoalbjorn
AoalbjornLv3

Except the bro and sis humor everything seems great. I love OPness, I love reasonable villans, and young masters. How she blackmails him albeit playfully is getting cringy now that he is powerful. One of the best novel. althought I agree with some of your statements.

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177566251485238r62Lv4

Hope there is no bro sis love.

Random_Me
Random_MeLv12

Right

Kyorkuna
KyorkunaLv14

I don’t understand why you have to hate the story I know it’s not your taste but no reason to rate it so poorly the books your rate “good” I would probably rate lower. This book is in my genre of preference and is actually pretty good grammar is the only issue.

theSeriusPrvrt
theSeriusPrvrtLv5

bro, he said the reason for him rating it 1 is to balance out because of high ratings it initially got, no need to be aggressive. ;)

Kyorkuna:I don’t understand why you have to hate the story I know it’s not your taste but no reason to rate it so poorly the books your rate “good” I would probably rate lower. This book is in my genre of preference and is actually pretty good grammar is the only issue.
addokin
addokinLv12

Garbage review, give some actual criticism

Nishydrome
NishydromeLv3

is this sarcasm? if not well...

addokin:Garbage review, give some actual criticism
Vj999
Vj999Lv3

Thanks for the heads-up. So this have some hentai stuff. Didn't made me interested. And more like disgusted. I can't omit this as small thing. Sis-bro romance? Hideous.

Shubham_Sahani_8834
Shubham_Sahani_8834Lv4

it is one of the best novel!!

Ambroshus
AmbroshusLv2

Isn’t that an exact reason to be aggressive? It’s like there’s a flavor of ice cream thats really good you like it lots of other people enjoy it but your going to say it’s a trash flavor because a lot of other people say they like it...🤦‍♂️

theSeriusPrvrt:bro, he said the reason for him rating it 1 is to balance out because of high ratings it initially got, no need to be aggressive. ;)
Seikatsu
SeikatsuLv5

You'd be better off reading infinite mana in an apocalypse

Aoalbjorn:Except the bro and sis humor everything seems great. I love OPness, I love reasonable villans, and young masters. How she blackmails him albeit playfully is getting cringy now that he is powerful. One of the best novel. althought I agree with some of your statements.
Seikatsu
SeikatsuLv5

They aren't related but the relationship between them really is cringy and disgusting. It made me drop this

Vj999:Thanks for the heads-up. So this have some hentai stuff. Didn't made me interested. And more like disgusted. I can't omit this as small thing. Sis-bro romance? Hideous.
Seikatsu
SeikatsuLv5

nope.

Shubham_Sahani_8834:it is one of the best novel!!
Tenku_Kun
Tenku_KunLv10

no? he never said it was trash. If i had to put his reasoning in line with your example it's something like "This Ice Cream is good, but its overrated" Why is everyone here that's defending the novel's high rating completely ignoring his reasoning behind his review? It doesn't help your case at all lmao

Ambroshus:Isn’t that an exact reason to be aggressive? It’s like there’s a flavor of ice cream thats really good you like it lots of other people enjoy it but your going to say it’s a trash flavor because a lot of other people say they like it...🤦‍♂️
Ambroshus
AmbroshusLv2

Okay 🤷‍♂️

Tenku_Kun:no? he never said it was trash. If i had to put his reasoning in line with your example it's something like "This Ice Cream is good, but its overrated" Why is everyone here that's defending the novel's high rating completely ignoring his reasoning behind his review? It doesn't help your case at all lmao
I_Love_Hina
I_Love_HinaLv13

incoherent babbles of a man who doesn't know joy

Wolf9
Wolf9Lv1

I agree with you. This is an average novel at best. The brother-sister relationship is off putting and cringy, but not the worse i've seen. As for balancing the 5 star reviews, I'd say that it is pointless. I find it more helpful to leave an actual review(around 2,5 to 3 stars for this one), than leave a 1 star one to balance the 5 stars. Those who read reviews to select a novel will probably ignore both extreme reviews.

CriticalReader
CriticalReaderLv2

everybody is a comedian apparently

Nishydrome:is this sarcasm? if not well...
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