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Ryuusei369
Ryuusei369Lv64yr
2020-04-05 20:21

I have read about 400 chapters. The story starts off pretty well. The cultivation path is quite interesting. But the MC is a doormat in front of girls. There is the little sister who is not actually his sister since he is blood adopted. She is a real piece of work. Very overpossessive of her brother and take recordings of what he says in a quite innocent manner and twists it so that it seems he said something perverted. She is always blackmailing him about how she is gonna tell everyone about how he wants to sleep with her. Which of course he doesn't(atleast until where I have read) all the while being the only one who wants to be together with him. If the MC thinks like that we can atleast say that it is because she is not his real sister sister since he is a transmigrator. But she has no excuse. Their parents only revealed that the MC was adopted by them on his 18th birthday,that is,when the story begins.Quite possibly one of the most annoying and unlikeable character. On the other hand her friend Alice is pretty good.A somewhat cliche character but till now only she seems normal morally. Also there is an overabundance of super powerful female characters who has a somewhat ambiguous relationship with the MC which makes me think this is going to be a harem. I can't be sure. Another problem I have is while the female characters start off quite strong, the story seems to be inching towards making them dependent on the MC. Yes they do get a lot of power from their own inheritances and hard work, but their power shows a drastic increase after they absorb the energy orbs provided by the MC. Yet another problem is the rest of the characters. While there exist a lot of powerful male characters, they remain in the background. Till now we are acquainted with a couple of strong male characters but they are only shown once in a while. The other mob characters exist only to admire the MC and be envious of him. The only good thing here is that there is no stupid cannon fodders who intentionally fights with the MC and get thrashed. They are often too afraid of his power and cultivation speed. The faceslapping and fighting is reserved for the alien races.

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chiiiii
chiiiiiLv11

So people other than the MC can use the energy orbs. That is sorely disappointing, as it should be a cheat exclusive to the MC alone. I don't like the trope of increasing other people's power along with the MC because they're inadequate, especially if it's all just girls [harem ruins plot]. Honestly, the sister should fk off already, no one likes her. It is truly absurd the author thinks it's morally okay for the sister to lust after someone who she's seen as her brother her whole life, until he was 18. ALABAMA. I don't think I'll read anymore of this novel because I don't want my hopes to crash.

ThyUnknownSaint
ThyUnknownSaintLv11

I don't hate the Yandere sister. It's just I dislike the awful execution of it. It makes it all seem unnecessary.

Lonmar
LonmarLv7

thanks for that insider comment. it confirms that this novel will disappoint me. but I will continue a little

Anthony69170
Anthony69170Lv13

Celle les homme qui on un complexe avec leur sœur liront sa se roman pourai être superbe mais gâcher par un mc qui na rien dans le pantalon les asiatique on vraiment un problème avec leur sœur

Ryuusei369
Ryuusei369Lv6

Being an Asian myself, I don't think all Asian men have a sister complex. Besides in this novel it's the girl who is a problem. The mc in the story is a transmigrator. He has no relationship whether via blood or by virtue of being brought up as siblings. Even then as far as I read, he didn't have any intention of pursuing her. He may not be a gentleman but he didn't seem like the kind of guy who breaks social taboos. I don't know how the author will warp his character in the future but right now he is not a harem seeking man.

Anthony69170:Celle les homme qui on un complexe avec leur sœur liront sa se roman pourai être superbe mais gâcher par un mc qui na rien dans le pantalon les asiatique on vraiment un problème avec leur sœur
FilledWithHope
FilledWithHopeLv5

Can you delete the other four? It sent multiple times.

Ryuusei369:Being an Asian myself, I don't think all Asian men have a sister complex. Besides in this novel it's the girl who is a problem. The mc in the story is a transmigrator. He has no relationship whether via blood or by virtue of being brought up as siblings. Even then as far as I read, he didn't have any intention of pursuing her. He may not be a gentleman but he didn't seem like the kind of guy who breaks social taboos. I don't know how the author will warp his character in the future but right now he is not a harem seeking man.
Ryuusei369
Ryuusei369Lv6

👍

FilledWithHope:Can you delete the other four? It sent multiple times.
N0ES
N0ESLv5

Ah so its one of those novels you have to turn off 90% of your active brain to read it. I'll pass, my control over logical sections of my brain isn't that good yet.

Sgt_Ragingbutete
Sgt_RagingbuteteLv4

beta chinese mc with few brain cells that shows his secret to other people imagine seeing a dude who produce unlimited cultivation resources like ... come on

177566251485238r62
177566251485238r62Lv4

Only downside is his sister. Hope there is no love relation with his sister though.

Potato
PotatoLv6

So no sexy time with anyone? This novel isn't 18+?

Meow_Sama
Meow_SamaLv12

thank god, I was almost about to dive in this novel..... I thank you from the bottomest part of my heart xD, but seriously, thanks

LtKaita
LtKaitaLv5

True yandere/tsundere imoutos are pretty entertaining when executed properly. The problem is the author failed on both counts with the little sister.

ThyUnknownSaint:I don't hate the Yandere sister. It's just I dislike the awful execution of it. It makes it all seem unnecessary.
LuciensThe
LuciensTheLv2

there are many things wrong in this novel, but the harem is truly off-putting, it started off well without particular directive towards the harem genre, but as the story progresses the characters are converted into typical , dependent on MC , harem women . this ruins a lot of potential that this has.

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