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Catrosious
CatrosiousLv44yr
2020-09-11 13:46

Another pathetic MC with his sistem~ And .. I'm pissed off reading it!

Soul Evolution System

Drack
4.5
537 Chs

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chp289
chp289Lv5

Shigure Kosaka **l..tanks_______ love the novel be the way only that the first summond was kind of stupid and illogic but yea overall is a great beginning whit qreat time pace. please all romance whit slowburn and for some reason i cant place 5 stars so it will be 4.8 sorry.love the novel 👺

5yr

Litrex1
Litrex1Lv15

Writing quality could be better especially the grammar, but it seems to be getting better. The story so far is really good. How the book looks right now i can see it only getting better and better. The interactions between characters have been well written so far. Only thing im worrying about, is how the girls will change once, they are in a realtionship with Alexander.

5yr
Gungnier
GungnierLv11

Reveal spoiler

5yr
Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

I give this story enough chance, but it's can't go forever. Pacing of the story is extremely slow.... No that's not right, people might think there some development aside his base growth-it's non-existent. And I mean it! Character growth- none, beside mature girls struggling to not fall for 12 years kid. Mc is in another dimension, he is dumb as horny brat, why you need to have him reincarnated - I don't know. It's doesn't add anything beside some knowledge about anime.... You can bs,that system just uploaded it in his brain, would be more tolerable. Priorities of the story is extremely screwed, we-readers come to see anime/game worlds and harem, but beside very bad and plain hstod there is none! Even girls have like 3 rate of priorities. You would think, hey, he must be training or learn how to be ruler? Nope, he doesn't do anything! His first priority is, to find more people for his camp and reduce population of zombies - it's boring!power system - stupid joke. He grow a little bit stronger then grow up men after killing directly or indirectly over 100 thousand zombies, that can evolve.... Oh, really? You know what this story is essentially? Cultivation ****-story! When autor try to squeeze as much words as he can and make useless, stupid arcs that doesn't have much meaning or give some enjoyment... Nothing. Even writing doesn't get better over 100 chapters, because he doesn't even trying. trying. Anyway, don't read it, I'm suffer, but you shouldn't. P.s. I'm sure he would delete this review, because there are no other ways, how this fanfic can have such a good score. At least read it before!

4yr
David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4

Another gamer system fic. You got the MC who gets blessed by the origin of the universe. What does he do with his new found power???? He monologues the whole world for about 8 chapters with his systems help. Then he summons a hot chick to help him out in a *cough*, High Tier World.... remember this girl is suppose to be really weak and comes from earth. Then after some additional frustration I decided to drop this story from how boring it became as I started to skim through the chapters. Also I couldn't forget that small detail of your SI being a freaking trap.

5yr
Harem_fan
Harem_fanLv5

DROPPING DUE TO USELESS HAREM!!!!!! -------Who gives a 12 year old [that cant even have sex] a great harem, I mean Issei from DxD is less useless in this department.....everything else is great but I came here for harem and I got a useless child harem wanna be king!...PEACE OUT!--------

4yr
Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12

trash ass fanfic, the author deletes the reviews that are not 4 stars and up and i keep seeing the same person copy and past 5 starts over and over ......................................................................................................................................................................................................

5yr
Nyxarias
NyxariasLv5

WOW nice Spam bot you got there Michael_Garcia_7550 LOL. So now the Review It Startet Very Good but when the Mc Got to the High School of the Dead it goes worse no Character devoempent at all there allready 100 chaps there. And com on why the **** did you give him a body of a 12 Year old and give him girls ?He cant do **** with them. Its like you go to an Inpotent guy give him a Golden Ticket and says with this you can go to any Borthel and get your freak on for free.Makes no sence at all.

4yr
Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv6

Reveal spoiler

5yr
eccentricbeing18
eccentricbeing18Lv4

I liked it at first but somewhere along the boring prolonged highschool of the dead arc, it somehow made me (a fan of hotd and it's fanfics) hate it. It became so boring that I thought I was watching the paint in a wall to dry. You can actually see how small the creativity of the author when there is no guidelines to go through. I mean it was better to watch a wall dry than to put up with the latest parts cause the wall won't annoy you with stupid kingdom building arc (where I'm confident that if he implements that in hotd/reality that it would definitely fall), stupid unrealistic love life (I mean seriously? You're either romantically retarded or you really have an ego where romance can only exist with mind control. I would pity you but you deserve it.), and stupidly boring plots where sexual innuendos was the only slightly interesting thing that exist (slightly interesting as in looking at a misplaced dirty magazine in a dentist's waiting room. Yeah, without the the mainstory guideline from the orig anime, **** got boring to the point that I was only reading it cause I was hoping it would stop to suck after the hotd arc is finished but you actually prolonged it.) I mean how stupid can you get when you thought a kid who uses his subordinate as a stand just to make him taller was a good way of getting respect and allegiance, when you thought that making a the orig mc's life a living hell would attract his mother, and when you thought a typical "young master" as an mc is attractive to the girls you picked? Yeah, stick to the mind control at least in fiction someone "loves" you if you call it that.

4yr
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