Item: Soul Evolution System
Rating: 2
Author: Harem_fan

Harem_fanLv54yr

2020-06-19 11:34

DROPPING DUE TO USELESS HAREM!!!!!! -------Who gives a 12 year old [that cant even have sex] a great harem, I mean Issei from DxD is less useless in this department.....everything else is great but I came here for harem and I got a useless child harem wanna be king!...PEACE OUT!--------

Soul Evolution System

Drack

4.5

537 Chs

Liked by 66 people

Replies6

Xen_120598Lv4

Fuck. if you who love harem the most said that it's bad then it's probably is ⊙_⊙⊙_⊙. haha

4yr

Harem_fanLv5

I just cant stand child protagonist with a harem, they cant even have ***!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Xen_120598:Fuck. if you who love harem the most said that it's bad then it's probably is ⊙_⊙⊙_⊙. haha

4yr

Ronn_LeeLv1

then stop reading...no-one wants to hear you whine

4yr

Harem_fanLv5

Wow that was random I dropped this half a year ago and you just now tell me this...are you in elementary school and learning how to count on your fingers for the time?

Ronn_Lee:then stop reading...no-one wants to hear you whine

4yr

Deadrule_vivekLv5

that's what reviews are for

Ronn_Lee:then stop reading...no-one wants to hear you whine

3yr

dukkehLv4

huh, good to know that in advance. I am out.

3yr

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Venom_GodLv12

trash ass fanfic, the author deletes the reviews that are not 4 stars and up and i keep seeing the same person copy and past 5 starts over and over ......................................................................................................................................................................................................

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NyxariasLv5

WOW nice Spam bot you got there Michael_Garcia_7550 LOL. So now the Review It Startet Very Good but when the Mc Got to the High School of the Dead it goes worse no Character devoempent at all there allready 100 chaps there. And com on why the **** did you give him a body of a 12 Year old and give him girls ?He cant do **** with them. Its like you go to an Inpotent guy give him a Golden Ticket and says with this you can go to any Borthel and get your freak on for free.Makes no sence at all.

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