First of this review is based on my opinions and everybody has a different taste so take it with a pinch of salt. Writing quality and stability is both pretty nice and can be compared to originals with experienced translators which is especially impressive considering its a fan-fiction and most works in this category tend to struggle in both. Story development again pretty nice neither the power level neither the harem feels too rushed albeit it feels strange how OP the Alex supposed to be when introduced but all those ability gains etc.. seemed to be forgotten over time he didn't even really learn new "powers" in the hotd arc so far. But actually not progressing the "system" in my opinion makes the story feel better, giving time to know other characters and setting, a lot of works loose their footing when power levels goes off charts and so far i really like the fact the mc is still in danger instead of being invincible like in many fan-fictions. I'm actually really glad the story doesn't go full Pokemon style gotta catch all the waifus. The only thing bothering me is the mc's pervert inner monologues which was funny the first few time but at this point gets kinda repetitive for me, especially there is already the "always everybody thinks he is a girl" trope for the fun factor. I especially love the fact the mc doesn't try to hide everything and its not avoided by simply making everybody not realize and question anything trough the sheer thickness of plot armor. There is some minor weaknesses in writing like describing characters, and the combat scenes so far tend to be really simple but that can be given by the fact the enemies so far ere goblins and zombies which both quite unintelligent, i hope i can see fights with more suspense in the future. The abilities are kinda badly explained especially i personally don't really feel the difference between the ranks and some abilities i don't even really notice if they work or not like for example "Luck" ability. What are the limits of his naming ability? etc... In the end i would really love to see the "Hidden Gem" tag on this one, writing quality is great and getting better over the chapters. Definitely deserves to be in the top 10 of the fan-fiction category and has great potential and looking forward for the next chapters.
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LIKEI wrote this review after reading it to chapter 72.
You must be pro reader.XD
this is a good review
yeah... it's 100% true. this novel might become epic if our mc is not a 12-year-old brat plus his intelligence is superb,
yeah . rank dont have any difference what used is there to level up when a level 70 has the same stats as lvl 40s and below
