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eccentricbeing18
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2020-07-06 14:38

I liked it at first but somewhere along the boring prolonged highschool of the dead arc, it somehow made me (a fan of hotd and it's fanfics) hate it. It became so boring that I thought I was watching the paint in a wall to dry. You can actually see how small the creativity of the author when there is no guidelines to go through. I mean it was better to watch a wall dry than to put up with the latest parts cause the wall won't annoy you with stupid kingdom building arc (where I'm confident that if he implements that in hotd/reality that it would definitely fall), stupid unrealistic love life (I mean seriously? You're either romantically retarded or you really have an ego where romance can only exist with mind control. I would pity you but you deserve it.), and stupidly boring plots where sexual innuendos was the only slightly interesting thing that exist (slightly interesting as in looking at a misplaced dirty magazine in a dentist's waiting room. Yeah, without the the mainstory guideline from the orig anime, **** got boring to the point that I was only reading it cause I was hoping it would stop to suck after the hotd arc is finished but you actually prolonged it.) I mean how stupid can you get when you thought a kid who uses his subordinate as a stand just to make him taller was a good way of getting respect and allegiance, when you thought that making a the orig mc's life a living hell would attract his mother, and when you thought a typical "young master" as an mc is attractive to the girls you picked? Yeah, stick to the mind control at least in fiction someone "loves" you if you call it that.

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