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Please make it a crossover with The Vampire Diaries ๐ฅบ
This one's canon right?
Downfall of many fics. When they try to be so edgy, they start to make an idiotic chapters for feels only to fix it with something called plot armor. Hays...
Raw?
Sounds like a Chinese fanfic down to the words and how it progresses
No need. Found it.
Raw??
The difference is that he had a choice with bonding with someone or eating someone in the get go. I get it. You want to replace Peter while being a symbiote, I get that. But the way you did it, made it look like he'd rather murder a random person than to bond with a random person. Because there's really no logical way for him to choose predator right away. Not even in a panicky state of mind.
Too late. The fanfic already f*cked the plot. The plot holes the author made just to give favor to the mc has already made me view this as trash
It's Guerilla tactics, not gorilla tactics. It's best you know it from a stranger than from a friend who'd tease you over it.