Item: Run, Girl (If You Can)
Rating: 5
Author: JiJi

JiJiLv105yr

2019-08-29 08:01

FINALLY! A story that I can get in board with. I’ve always loved straightforward stories that doesn’t beat around the bush but remains to be poignant and memorable. Heart wrenching as Keeley‘s life was prior we see her grow into herself in her new life in such a way that doesn’t leave room for disappointment. She lives for herself and her loved ones no longer blindingly lead by youth’s naïveté and inexperience. Our ML on the other hand has plenty of room for error as he dun effed up big time in his last life. And it’s no small infraction. Everything you can think of wrong to do against a woman when in a committed relationship, the ML has done them all and more. We see his journey to redemption and how even with a lifetime’s experience not even he can predict the future and most importantly the complexity of human emotion. The story is smooth going and very easy to follow. The characters are lovable and relatable. I’m definitely looking forward to future developments with these two. Throw in a secondary ML to throw off the first and now we’re talking. Read all 90 plus chapters in one day, which says a lot about the impact of the storyline. I’m forgoing sleep to write this review. And so, with heavy eyelids I bid you readers Adieu 👋🏻 Read. Cry. Repeat.

Run, Girl (If You Can)

Mcllorycat

4.8

547 Chs

Liked by 133 people

Replies9

Hermenk_73Lv10

Reading your review has intrigued me. I am looking forward to this book now

5yr

NafeyLv4

Gradually they will get back together,at least the funs can predict this one.

5yr

DarkImmortal_IntelLv14

I hate stories like this. Dude destroys girl, girl leaves him, dude then forces said girl. . .

5yr

_Ocelot_Lv14

Thanks for a review with actual info. It's greatly appreciated.

4yr

Madai_RebollarLv2

Haven't finished this but I am truly enjoying it. It's a story that's making me want to shake them both and scream "Talk to each other!" but I'm enjoying the build up.

4yr

Bankm_NadioLv1

Madai_Rebollar:Haven't finished this but I am truly enjoying it. It's a story that's making me want to shake them both and scream "Talk to each other!" but I'm enjoying the build up.

4yr

NancyeLv3

Fr . preach ✋✨

4yr

mtnchick22Lv10

I am addicted to this story! I cant get enough of it!

3yr

DaoistPYVClwLv1

I'm a bit upset because I won't be able to finish the rest of the book The storyline is really good but I hate not being able to top up to finish it

3yr

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