FINALLY! A story that I can get in board with. I’ve always loved straightforward stories that doesn’t beat around the bush but remains to be poignant and memorable. Heart wrenching as Keeley‘s life was prior we see her grow into herself in her new life in such a way that doesn’t leave room for disappointment. She lives for herself and her loved ones no longer blindingly lead by youth’s naïveté and inexperience. Our ML on the other hand has plenty of room for error as he dun effed up big time in his last life. And it’s no small infraction. Everything you can think of wrong to do against a woman when in a committed relationship, the ML has done them all and more. We see his journey to redemption and how even with a lifetime’s experience not even he can predict the future and most importantly the complexity of human emotion. The story is smooth going and very easy to follow. The characters are lovable and relatable. I’m definitely looking forward to future developments with these two. Throw in a secondary ML to throw off the first and now we’re talking. Read all 90 plus chapters in one day, which says a lot about the impact of the storyline. I’m forgoing sleep to write this review. And so, with heavy eyelids I bid you readers Adieu 👋🏻 Read. Cry. Repeat.

** Minor Spoilers about the book, but nothing specific, just general content/themes*** Great story, in line with the other stories by this author. If you haven't read her other stories, read them! She is awesome at writing romance stories that are light-hearted/feel good, for when you want to read something and don't want to deal with the bullpoop love triangles that are so common. There are the typical misunderstandings common in romance books, but they are usually resolved quickly and are not drawn out for 200 pages. READ THIS AUTHOR'S BOOKS!

Loves Mclorrycat's stories as always. Try reading it. A double reincarnation story mixed with righting the wrong cliche but the ML is the one doing the righting and makes the story tastes like bittersweet chocolate. Feeling sorry for the guy but he's still not giving up and this makes the chasing exciting and funny. So, read it.

I love it. I love it. I love it. I wish to fill the entire review repeating how much I like the story. I can feel the pain and I think it is thrilling for both leads to have been reborn and fl avoiding ML in this second life. Can't wait to catch up. ❤️❤️❤️❤️

I came here from a clickbait ad on Facebook. I was expecting the usual quick trash romance where the male lead is usually abusive, but MAN OH MAN I was in for a ride. While trying to rack up coins to continue reading (since I've already spent $25+ on this alone and I'm not exactly rich), I've read the ones unlocked over and over for all of my read time in this app. I've cried numerous times each go round. Suspense was built, expectations were subverted, and I am impressed! The world is developed -- NYC feels like NYC. The characters are developed -- they don't feel like they're just there to fulfill certain tropes or "slots" (best friend slot, mean girl slot, third wheel slot, etc.). The writing is carefully planned out -- things from the past tie into things from the future, and nothing seems wholly random. In other words, I feel like this could be sold as a hard copy. I'd buy it.

Magnificent book. I am not going to lie. At first I hated ML and I was cursing him like crazy every second paragraph. I HATED HIM! But MC was so good and no matter the “back to time” beginning, it was so realistic, well written and beautifully explained... It all made sense while it was so enjoyable and satisfying that I could not stop reading. Character development was exceptional and author created expectations that were fulfilled. I got to read an awesome story that it was impossible to put down. When you write something with love it shows. Author, thank you for loving your characters and your readers!!! A must read.

One of the best stories I’ve read in a long time! I havent been able to put my phone down since the first chapter![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

This is undoubtedly one of the best stories I have read in the rebirth genre. The story line is very different from any other story I have read of similar genre. I love how the author shows the gradual change in the MC and ML's characters. Also how the story covers all the side characters and their love stories. Usually stories tend to not go in depth of what happens after the main leads fall in love or what happens to other people around them. This story covered it all and more! I feel like every questions I had were answered and all the loose ends were tied. The fact that it's well written and barely has any grammar or spelling errors was a great bonus. Thank you author for your wonderful work!

A story so different from other reincarnation stories. No advantage to the reborned one bcs both of them reincarnated. And a load crap of misunderstanding on the name of love and protection. And now after reborn the ml trying to correct all his actions and giving fl what she deserved. Her Life. And an Understanding Companion even though it hurt him a lot bcs he also a victim like her. Love it author. Worth reading it. ❤️❤️❤️❤️