Item: Run, Girl (If You Can)
Rating: 5
Author: Antigony

AntigonyLv144yr

2021-01-23 03:13

Magnificent book. I am not going to lie. At first I hated ML and I was cursing him like crazy every second paragraph. I HATED HIM! But MC was so good and no matter the “back to time” beginning, it was so realistic, well written and beautifully explained... It all made sense while it was so enjoyable and satisfying that I could not stop reading. Character development was exceptional and author created expectations that were fulfilled. I got to read an awesome story that it was impossible to put down. When you write something with love it shows. Author, thank you for loving your characters and your readers!!! A must read.

Run, Girl (If You Can)

Mcllorycat

4.8

547 Chs

Liked by 7 people

Replies3

McllorycatAuthor

Thank you so much 😭😭

4yr

AntigonyLv14

Congratulations for this gem!!!! I could write for hours about it but I didn’t want to give spoilers. SPOILERS All your characters were so well described and multidimensional 🥰 I loved her attitude towards her second chance. I loved the way he realized his mistakes and the whole marathon towards redemption. The way we navigated through this story from her POV (hating ML) and his POV (my poor emotional quadriplegic). I can’t believe how you made us (and her) forgive him (for his stupidity) and love him again. And bless you for not rubbing the villains endlessly in our face. You maintaining the focus point where it should be. (And I searched her recipes in pinterest 😜) and not a single cliché 🥰🥰🥰🥰 and so many adorable second characters and closure. I will certainly reread it 😍

Mcllorycat:Thank you so much 😭😭

4yr

McllorycatAuthor

I feel so appreciated right now! Feel free to check out my other stuff on here. Several of them are completed as well :)

4yr

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