Item: Dark Lord Dumbledore
Rating: 1
Author: David_Drake

David_DrakeLv43yr

2021-09-14 09:58

Evil brain washing MC who is a major Simp. Since the author has vanished with no trace, I can finally put up a proper review. This would make it the fourth time I posted here lol. Let us see if Chad-Beta-san will delete this once again or comment something 'special'.

Dark Lord Dumbledore

Chado_Sama

4.6

107 Chs

Liked by 19 people

Replies5

Chado_SamaAuthor

Well, well well, if it isn't my old friend David Gayle! A pleasure to see I still live rent-free in your head. I swear that the character in my last novel sharing the same name as you was purely a coincidence, I have no idea why you would hold such hatred for me. Alas, I can only continue soldiering on with my hobby of writing fanfiction without your approval. It will be hard, knowing that David 'white knight critic' Gayle is not cheering for my success. Oh, and didn't I prove that I never deleted your reviews? Don't cry anymore David, you seem on edge enough as it is by review bombing my fanfics. Please try to find some emotional stability.

3yr

Animelover1416Lv5

Hey bro I want to ask about your plans on your Tgd novel on Shen Yue. I mean there are some updates in the past year but if you keep counting on him for your novel then it would be wait forever. In my opinion you should self insert your own plot. Hope my comment will be useful for you. -one of your readers.

Chado_Sama:Well, well well, if it isn't my old friend David Gayle! A pleasure to see I still live rent-free in your head. I swear that the character in my last novel sharing the same name as you was purely a coincidence, I have no idea why you would hold such hatred for me. Alas, I can only continue soldiering on with my hobby of writing fanfiction without your approval. It will be hard, knowing that David 'white knight critic' Gayle is not cheering for my success. Oh, and didn't I prove that I never deleted your reviews? Don't cry anymore David, you seem on edge enough as it is by review bombing my fanfics. Please try to find some emotional stability.

3yr

St_PatLv4

Agreed!

Animelover1416:Hey bro I want to ask about your plans on your Tgd novel on Shen Yue. I mean there are some updates in the past year but if you keep counting on him for your novel then it would be wait forever. In my opinion you should self insert your own plot. Hope my comment will be useful for you. -one of your readers.

3yr

ArslanIILv2

Hey man, everything okay? You haven't been active for awhile now

3yr

patienceLoveLv5

Are you okay? I sew your in Australia, you're not stuck in prison for hate speech or something, right?

2yr

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