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asaade_ragnarokm
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2021-05-31 22:04

if you want a fic that has no conclusion and waste your time with all the useless plot, empire building then this is for you. seriously he made a chadtopia train those elf minion then in the end when dumbledore is still not dead r.o.b decided to multiverse jump him without conclusion to this fic. what a waste of time 100+ of chapter got wasted because the author don't know what to write next and decided to cut it and just go multiverse jump so when he run out again he can just jump him again

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Chado_Sama
Chado_SamaAuthor

What was he supposed to do after killing Dumbledore? There would be maybe ten chaps of him finalising control over the world. Which he can do when he returns to Potterverse. I get you wanted a complete conclusion to the story, but this way his journey continues.

asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv4

yep this is really waste of time and did you see your fanfic title? it says "dark lord dumbledore" i didn't find anything about multiverse travel on the title nor on the tag, so you see this fic and 100+ of chapter is just a waste of time, we can actually just read the beginning and the ending and we wont miss a single thing

Chado_Sama:What was he supposed to do after killing Dumbledore? There would be maybe ten chaps of him finalising control over the world. Which he can do when he returns to Potterverse. I get you wanted a complete conclusion to the story, but this way his journey continues.
Chado_Sama
Chado_SamaAuthor

Do you know what a ROB is, and what they like doing best? He can pluck MC out of Earth and insert him in a fictional setting. Really? You didn't see it coming? Do you perhaps wear glasses?

asaade_ragnarokm:yep this is really waste of time and did you see your fanfic title? it says "dark lord dumbledore" i didn't find anything about multiverse travel on the title nor on the tag, so you see this fic and 100+ of chapter is just a waste of time, we can actually just read the beginning and the ending and we wont miss a single thing
asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv4

duhhh then it should be on the tag how come its not in there? do you think many will read this if you put a multiverse tag and didn't lie to the readers

Chado_Sama:Do you know what a ROB is, and what they like doing best? He can pluck MC out of Earth and insert him in a fictional setting. Really? You didn't see it coming? Do you perhaps wear glasses?
Chado_Sama
Chado_SamaAuthor

Lie to the readers? How? Did I say he was only going to stay in Potterverse? No. In fact, I have mentioned a few times that he will be going to other worlds.

asaade_ragnarokm:duhhh then it should be on the tag how come its not in there? do you think many will read this if you put a multiverse tag and didn't lie to the readers
asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv4

yup just change the title or add the multiverse tag

Chado_Sama:Lie to the readers? How? Did I say he was only going to stay in Potterverse? No. In fact, I have mentioned a few times that he will be going to other worlds.
Chado_Sama
Chado_SamaAuthor

You can only have 10 tags, and when I created the book, I didn't plan to make it a multiverse story. It was only as I reached the end that I decided it. Still laughing how you think writers can lie to their readers by not telling them the entire plot. At no point did I say it wasn't a multiverse, and a ROB implied it could be. You are hilarious.

asaade_ragnarokm:yup just change the title or add the multiverse tag
asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv4

nope if you reread your early chapter with meeting the Rob there's nothing in there that gives he'll go multiverse and his only mission is to destroy dumbles and also him building his empire, training his elf ninja, conquering country this implied that there's no multiverse travelling until you reveal your deceitful nature and just waste our time, you're just like the author cornbringer that waste his readers time when 100+ of chapter is actually have nothing to do with the ending

Chado_Sama:You can only have 10 tags, and when I created the book, I didn't plan to make it a multiverse story. It was only as I reached the end that I decided it. Still laughing how you think writers can lie to their readers by not telling them the entire plot. At no point did I say it wasn't a multiverse, and a ROB implied it could be. You are hilarious.
Chado_Sama
Chado_SamaAuthor

ROB: Random Omnipotent Being. Can send a guy to a fictional universe. Is only interested in being entertained. Is petty and selfish. Yeah, didn't see him sending MC to another fictional setting once he achieved his goal at all. Also, MC was just as surprised since he thought it was his new life. And who says I can't do it in the first place? You? Who is this we? Are you president of my fan club and speaking on their behalf? Were you possibly dropped as a child? Specifically on your head?

asaade_ragnarokm:nope if you reread your early chapter with meeting the Rob there's nothing in there that gives he'll go multiverse and his only mission is to destroy dumbles and also him building his empire, training his elf ninja, conquering country this implied that there's no multiverse travelling until you reveal your deceitful nature and just waste our time, you're just like the author cornbringer that waste his readers time when 100+ of chapter is actually have nothing to do with the ending
asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv4

hahaha why are you defensive liar???

Chado_Sama:ROB: Random Omnipotent Being. Can send a guy to a fictional universe. Is only interested in being entertained. Is petty and selfish. Yeah, didn't see him sending MC to another fictional setting once he achieved his goal at all. Also, MC was just as surprised since he thought it was his new life. And who says I can't do it in the first place? You? Who is this we? Are you president of my fan club and speaking on their behalf? Were you possibly dropped as a child? Specifically on your head?
Chado_Sama
Chado_SamaAuthor

Yep, your mum definitely dropped you on your head trying to do her Only Fans.

asaade_ragnarokm:hahaha why are you defensive liar???
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asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv4

hahahaha your really an idiot you know only fans gotten popular this past few years, what am i a genius baby?? ohh right you're a deceitful beingso anything that comes out of your mind is always deceit, sup lucifers brother

Chado_Sama:Yep, your mum definitely dropped you on your head trying to do her Only Fans.
Chado_Sama
Chado_SamaAuthor

How did you know if it was or wasn't around? I was only joking man, didn't realize your mum actually flashed some gash for cash. That must have been a bad childhood, suddenly your comments about being betrayed have a whole new meaning. My apologies, bro, didn't mean to open old wounds...

asaade_ragnarokm:hahahaha your really an idiot you know only fans gotten popular this past few years, what am i a genius baby?? ohh right you're a deceitful beingso anything that comes out of your mind is always deceit, sup lucifers brother
asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv4

huh?? are you really an idiot? don't you know how to use Internet? sad no wonder you still resort to your deceitful nature, i just search it in the net and you know you can also just search it on google, I'm not like you who is known for your deceitful nature lucifer's brother

Chado_Sama:How did you know if it was or wasn't around? I was only joking man, didn't realize your mum actually flashed some gash for cash. That must have been a bad childhood, suddenly your comments about being betrayed have a whole new meaning. My apologies, bro, didn't mean to open old wounds...
Chado_Sama
Chado_SamaAuthor

Sorry man, never looked at Only Fans. What's your mum's account? I will help support you, bro.

asaade_ragnarokm:huh?? are you really an idiot? don't you know how to use Internet? sad no wonder you still resort to your deceitful nature, i just search it in the net and you know you can also just search it on google, I'm not like you who is known for your deceitful nature lucifer's brother
asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv4

ohh your family is doing only fans come on tell us i might help you promote your family home alabama account, no wonder your deceitful nature is really good i should have seen its because of your family genes, you need to look normal outside so nobody will know how sick oops how different your families taste is, but becausebof only fans and some sites your family situation is slowly getting accepted by the other and that's why you are showing now your true nature hmm hmm understandable, so dont worry about those who judge you or your family for there peculiar taste, dont worry i will help you promote your family alabama accounts to others, and congratulations on your debut with your mother and sister

Chado_Sama:Sorry man, never looked at Only Fans. What's your mum's account? I will help support you, bro.
basara77
basara77Lv3

(Written with the Google translator. This comment is totally and solely my opinion, I do not seek to offend anyone, but I am not so naive as to think that no one will be offended) I really don't know who is worse between the two. One complains about the story as if he is losing money in some way, the other unnecessarily defends himself in strange ways. I really don't understand why they complain so much about the end of the story, it is stupid in many respects, first, you don't literally lose anything other than the time invested in reading this story, and second, you have no right or vote on how the author is going to do your story, if you want to have the right to complain about the story, then invest money in the author, so you would have the right to complain about the story. Comments were never created to complain about the plot of a story, in fact, the same stars dictate what is judged in the comments (Quality of writing, Stability of updates, Story development, Character design and World background ). Now I can only say the following to the author: do not pay attention to these types of comments, in fact, if you can delete them, since they are not complaints about your quality, but personal comments that damage the opinion of future readers. It's unfair, I know, but you have a reputation to defend, and answering these kinds of comments makes other people think they might affect you in some way.

asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv4

haven't you heard of the saying time is gold? answering your questions about those story quality, update speed, and the other 3 is quite invalid in this fic since all of the 100+ chapter is been invalidated when the author decided to reveal his decietful nature and trash those chapter on the bin, so my review is accurate for the new reader if they want to read this and not waste they're time, reading 100+chapters of empire building then actually all of those is useless and doesnt need in the story thats a lot of waste of time. and review is also there to warn other readers on what to expect on what will they read.

basara77:(Written with the Google translator. This comment is totally and solely my opinion, I do not seek to offend anyone, but I am not so naive as to think that no one will be offended) I really don't know who is worse between the two. One complains about the story as if he is losing money in some way, the other unnecessarily defends himself in strange ways. I really don't understand why they complain so much about the end of the story, it is stupid in many respects, first, you don't literally lose anything other than the time invested in reading this story, and second, you have no right or vote on how the author is going to do your story, if you want to have the right to complain about the story, then invest money in the author, so you would have the right to complain about the story. Comments were never created to complain about the plot of a story, in fact, the same stars dictate what is judged in the comments (Quality of writing, Stability of updates, Story development, Character design and World background ). Now I can only say the following to the author: do not pay attention to these types of comments, in fact, if you can delete them, since they are not complaints about your quality, but personal comments that damage the opinion of future readers. It's unfair, I know, but you have a reputation to defend, and answering these kinds of comments makes other people think they might affect you in some way.
DragonGodSmith3000
DragonGodSmith3000Lv14

So whens the next journey starting then bro lol

Chado_Sama:Lie to the readers? How? Did I say he was only going to stay in Potterverse? No. In fact, I have mentioned a few times that he will be going to other worlds.
Chado_Sama
Chado_SamaAuthor

Sometime within the next week or two. Got work coming out the wazoo so limited for time writing new chaps. Up to chap 62 on patron though.

DragonGodSmith3000:So whens the next journey starting then bro lol
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