If you skip the whole story and start at the end (106) you won't miss a thing, everything the MC learned, knew and invented in these 105 chapters went to Nothing
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What was he supposed to do after killing Dumbledore? There would be maybe ten chaps of him finalising control over the world. Which he can do when he returns to Potterverse. I get you wanted a complete conclusion to the story, but this way his journey continues.
there is not only magical Britain, the MC has not reached the pinnacle of magical experience or knowledge, the MC throughout this story has had no character development, and I believe some readers, hoped that when the MC was freed from "fear" of Dumbledore, he would develop a mentality and personality and start living, creating a new society or a family
Chado_Sama:What was he supposed to do after killing Dumbledore? There would be maybe ten chaps of him finalising control over the world. Which he can do when he returns to Potterverse. I get you wanted a complete conclusion to the story, but this way his journey continues.
with decent character development, you would be able to justify the MC's "genius" in other worlds, as he would have more time to take other points of view, like for example, the MC creating a new magical society he would have better management capabilities, in developing this community to be equal to non-magicals, he would have to master muggle matters or improve them, have kids or a family he would have more empathy and would be less of a robot that hides and always takes out an invention Op when the author doesn't know how to continue the plot
Thigs_0508:there is not only magical Britain, the MC has not reached the pinnacle of magical experience or knowledge, the MC throughout this story has had no character development, and I believe some readers, hoped that when the MC was freed from "fear" of Dumbledore, he would develop a mentality and personality and start living, creating a new society or a family
Once you can infiltrate a government and subvert the higher-ups, it is only a matter of time before you control everything. Dumbledore was head of the ICW, all Chad would have to do is subvert his replacement and slowly recruit. Character doesn't develop much when you hold all the power, and there will always be something else to fear, like ROB.
Thigs_0508:there is not only magical Britain, the MC has not reached the pinnacle of magical experience or knowledge, the MC throughout this story has had no character development, and I believe some readers, hoped that when the MC was freed from "fear" of Dumbledore, he would develop a mentality and personality and start living, creating a new society or a family
I say really govern, not sway from the shadows
Chado_Sama:Once you can infiltrate a government and subvert the higher-ups, it is only a matter of time before you control everything. Dumbledore was head of the ICW, all Chad would have to do is subvert his replacement and slowly recruit. Character doesn't develop much when you hold all the power, and there will always be something else to fear, like ROB.
That comes after you own everyone.
Thigs_0508:I say really govern, not sway from the shadows
I am completely speechless that you even copy pasted the same argument to this review as well. Just how sad can this get?
Chado_Sama:What was he supposed to do after killing Dumbledore? There would be maybe ten chaps of him finalising control over the world. Which he can do when he returns to Potterverse. I get you wanted a complete conclusion to the story, but this way his journey continues.
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Astralek:I am completely speechless that you even copy pasted the same argument to this review as well. Just how sad can this get?image
yeah i reas that comment too its like he is kid asking about what will happen when i finish 2nd year of school there are plenty of thing you can do like the comment above has wrote
Astralek:I am completely speechless that you even copy pasted the same argument to this review as well. Just how sad can this get?image
