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Danny_Pang
Danny_PangLv14yr
2020-05-26 18:21

Typical kid mc that is extremely arrogant and unlikeable, nothing new. It started of well with the mc background but slowly devolved into the mc being arrogant once br started to get stronger. Killing people constantly with no regards. Had potential but unfortunately bad mc development killed the story for me.

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Sanism
SanismLv2

I never really saw him as someone arrogant above the need and can't justify why someone would do either, Looking down on people when you are far above from them is quite natural but I guess you wouldn't know since you are most likely at the bottom of the society.

Danny_Pang
Danny_PangLv1

Sure, go ahead and rely on petty insults instead of offering any constructive criticism. What better way to put forth your review right? Try to provide something of value next time instead kid

Sanism:I never really saw him as someone arrogant above the need and can't justify why someone would do either, Looking down on people when you are far above from them is quite natural but I guess you wouldn't know since you are most likely at the bottom of the society.
Sanism
SanismLv2

I am not trying to insult you or anything, in fact I don't even know who the hell you are. I am just generalizing you with average statistics and they tell me that you are "most likely" at the bottom of the society. And what do you mean something of value? I am pretty sure I did provide something "of value" or is your definition of "value" deluded?

Danny_Pang:Sure, go ahead and rely on petty insults instead of offering any constructive criticism. What better way to put forth your review right? Try to provide something of value next time instead kid
Afas_Infos
Afas_InfosLv1

This is an alternative history, keep your common sense to yourself

DaoistlQWTYc
DaoistlQWTYcLv1

lol bro that's surely is insult and that's not even reply. it seem to me that you're just easily triggered person and start spouting offence, calling him “bottom of the society” just because he didn't have a same choice as yours . grow up kid

Sanism:I am not trying to insult you or anything, in fact I don't even know who the hell you are. I am just generalizing you with average statistics and they tell me that you are "most likely" at the bottom of the society. And what do you mean something of value? I am pretty sure I did provide something "of value" or is your definition of "value" deluded?
Konner_MorrisLv15

This is why reading reviews is almost always more fascinating than the book itself. You get the duality of man in barely 4 texts. amazing

Idle_SoulLv3

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ReihsRahlLv10

I may enjoy a cold and evil MC, but there are several problems: 1st this is way beyond, I’ve read untill chapter 233 and he was the worst person in the whole novel, he is a complete sociopath 2nd his personality is completely flat, he is like a robot, completely devoid of emotions, and incredibly boring. It gets tiring having a psycho MC if he never makes you laugh 3rd and most important: the MC can be a total sociopath, but when the author tries continuosly to justify his choices with some cheap logic and a ridiculous view of the world that can be easily destroyed by anyone with a bit of common sense... well... that’s when u break the limit, if u want a spycho MC fine, but don’t try to make readers take his side as if he could be justify. He can’t and his logic is ridiculous and full of holes. I could go on, but, honestly it’s not worth it. I just add a last thing: the system of the nobles doesn’t make any sense, there is no wolrd were it could work it’s completely idiotic. Even if 99.9% of nobles are complete idiot that decides to keep any resource and technique for themselves there is bound to be someone who does not, and this someone would easily gain power, since it’s been clearly shown that there are countless genius among common people and just providing them the techniques would easily surpass all other powers that have an extremely low number of members die to their idiotic system. It’s impossible that a system that allows less than 1% of the population to cultivate with proper resources can go on for long, since granting proper techniques to common talented people would easily allow to create a way bigger force and it’s impossible that no one ever tried.

mishafondLv1

I like the story, the plots not really unique but its entertaining to read. My one issue with this novel is, well, the romance aspect of it. I don't care if the MC is deranged or a lunatic, however it doesn't make any sense why its in the plot. Where exactly does MC even find time for a romance is the grand scheme of things?!?!? It's so unrealistic and contradictory to how you established character... how exactly does romance fit into a novel where the protag is motivated by ambition to overcome the laws of the world in the novel? He wants powers, he actively strives for it and disregards the life of others like insects to achieve what he wants.... and now your trying to make me believe he can suddenly love after all that he's done and willing to do? It's ridiculous. You don't establish the essence of your character as ruthless and power hungry, devoid of feeling and morality, only seeking power, to add in a romance in the middle of the novel.... You might ask why you shouldn't do this? Easy! Because someone willing to do anything for power would NEVER LOVE ANYONE that would become a HUGE weakness. It contradicts your plot and established MC's sense of self/motivations/goals that the author wrote HIMSELF. You could see from the earlier chapters of this novel that the author kept trying to find ways to make a romance happen, inserting the obvious FL every chance he got and it only got worse, especially at around chapter(s) 592+ onwards. It would have been all great except how the MC progressed many many chapters earlier. We know that he's a psychopath, and he lacks any feelings. By the time the romance (AKA lovesick desperate author wants some MEOWWW) comes in, its not only unbelievable, it's an insult to readers intelligence and time spent reading.

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