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MichaelLouisXXI
MichaelLouisXXILv135yr
2019-07-15 14:01

An extremely well written story. A real quality work. But, there needs at least 10chaps/day for it to truly be perfect 😉.....,................................,.................. .......

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El_Bz
El_BzLv2

Were all men of quality here and I think we all agree that so it don't affect the story. We need a 20 chapters release

soggywaffles
soggywafflesLv2

I am adding a reply to get a reward so here u go

adela_mendez
adela_mendezLv2

What they said💀^

MysticalSword
MysticalSwordLv11

Truly well written

TheMothMan
TheMothManLv5

Oh hey darknorth you still alive?

MichaelLouisXXI
MichaelLouisXXILv13

Pretty sure i'm not dead How're you?

TheMothMan:Oh hey darknorth you still alive?
TheMothMan
TheMothManLv5

I'm mighty fine drifting in the waters of webnovel searching for a worthy read.

MichaelLouisXXI:Pretty sure i'm not dead How're you?
Jack_N_Mikhail
Jack_N_MikhailLv15

I'm usually scouring the vast Galaxy of translated novels, focusing on those that have been completely written by the Author. I cast my glance on Original Novels only on occasion, and it so happened that this novel caught my fancy.

TheMothMan:I'm mighty fine drifting in the waters of webnovel searching for a worthy read.
Niegil_Bob
Niegil_BobLv2

Ok

Zook_51
Zook_51Lv15

The story is excellent. Each chapter captivates you and draws you into the next chapter. As the story progress and you develope with the character you can't help but be amazed even when the author takes the character in a different direction than you expect. Those twists keeps you from become bored and desiring the author to write more...

Aklyf
AklyfLv5

Would it be the same as xianxia novels..where MC takes one step fight ensures...I like weak to strong but if every corner mc have to face rich snot brats then elders then clan head to sects it's get annoying ..will it be the same..?

MichaelLouisXXI
MichaelLouisXXILv13

Absolutely not

Aklyf:Would it be the same as xianxia novels..where MC takes one step fight ensures...I like weak to strong but if every corner mc have to face rich snot brats then elders then clan head to sects it's get annoying ..will it be the same..?
pyrorangel22
pyrorangel22Lv10

Same lol

soggywaffles:I am adding a reply to get a reward so here u go
Vishesh_Mahajan
Vishesh_MahajanLv10

Same here

soggywaffles:I am adding a reply to get a reward so here u go
waring
waringLv13

Especially with it only being 1500 words a chapter

DaoistgRidVH
DaoistgRidVHLv2

...

El_Bz:Were all men of quality here and I think we all agree that so it don't affect the story. We need a 20 chapters release
specs
specsLv5

As long as such speed doesn't affected the quality, it would be absolutely beau.

SkyEmpress
SkyEmpressLv4

haha yes you speak for all of us here XD

Maverick_Pettipas
Maverick_PettipasLv13

The author should release all of the chapters, and then get it published so i can read them all over again on real paper

datruph18
datruph18Lv11

I just started this book but i cant put it down

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RockNRage
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ReihsRahl
ReihsRahlLv10

I may enjoy a cold and evil MC, but there are several problems: 1st this is way beyond, I’ve read untill chapter 233 and he was the worst person in the whole novel, he is a complete sociopath 2nd his personality is completely flat, he is like a robot, completely devoid of emotions, and incredibly boring. It gets tiring having a psycho MC if he never makes you laugh 3rd and most important: the MC can be a total sociopath, but when the author tries continuosly to justify his choices with some cheap logic and a ridiculous view of the world that can be easily destroyed by anyone with a bit of common sense... well... that’s when u break the limit, if u want a spycho MC fine, but don’t try to make readers take his side as if he could be justify. He can’t and his logic is ridiculous and full of holes. I could go on, but, honestly it’s not worth it. I just add a last thing: the system of the nobles doesn’t make any sense, there is no wolrd were it could work it’s completely idiotic. Even if 99.9% of nobles are complete idiot that decides to keep any resource and technique for themselves there is bound to be someone who does not, and this someone would easily gain power, since it’s been clearly shown that there are countless genius among common people and just providing them the techniques would easily surpass all other powers that have an extremely low number of members die to their idiotic system. It’s impossible that a system that allows less than 1% of the population to cultivate with proper resources can go on for long, since granting proper techniques to common talented people would easily allow to create a way bigger force and it’s impossible that no one ever tried.

mishafond
mishafondLv1

I like the story, the plots not really unique but its entertaining to read. My one issue with this novel is, well, the romance aspect of it. I don't care if the MC is deranged or a lunatic, however it doesn't make any sense why its in the plot. Where exactly does MC even find time for a romance is the grand scheme of things?!?!? It's so unrealistic and contradictory to how you established character... how exactly does romance fit into a novel where the protag is motivated by ambition to overcome the laws of the world in the novel? He wants powers, he actively strives for it and disregards the life of others like insects to achieve what he wants.... and now your trying to make me believe he can suddenly love after all that he's done and willing to do? It's ridiculous. You don't establish the essence of your character as ruthless and power hungry, devoid of feeling and morality, only seeking power, to add in a romance in the middle of the novel.... You might ask why you shouldn't do this? Easy! Because someone willing to do anything for power would NEVER LOVE ANYONE that would become a HUGE weakness. It contradicts your plot and established MC's sense of self/motivations/goals that the author wrote HIMSELF. You could see from the earlier chapters of this novel that the author kept trying to find ways to make a romance happen, inserting the obvious FL every chance he got and it only got worse, especially at around chapter(s) 592+ onwards. It would have been all great except how the MC progressed many many chapters earlier. We know that he's a psychopath, and he lacks any feelings. By the time the romance (AKA lovesick desperate author wants some MEOWWW) comes in, its not only unbelievable, it's an insult to readers intelligence and time spent reading.

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