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FuhuaLv34yr
2020-09-13 07:19

Ok so I read about 200 chapters, I'm a really picky reader so I lll tell you why I dropped it. ❤️ ▪️Writing quality ★★★☆☆ 🔸Story development ★★☆☆☆ ▪️Character design ★★☆☆☆ 🔸Updating stability ★★★☆☆ ▪️World background ★☆☆☆☆ The plot is relatively okay, it's not something spectacularly, just so so, the different thing from other novels I think is the fact that the fl is not OP (this too is just because she's a lazy fck) I liked the fl s family, they are very nice and I loved the emperor, he was such a sweet father. Hm, sincerely the think that destroyed the plot is the fl herself. At first she appears to be serious, calm and calculative,yknow that type of tranquil girl but at soon as she sees the ML she goes crazy 😭—cry because another ml destroyed a relatively good fl. In every single chapter she says "I want to sleep with the ml" not just inner thoughts, but verbally to other people and that made me cringe so much omg. She just saw him and claims him as "mine", like she doesn't even consider his feelings I may be just overreacting but can't stand her attitude. OK, I laughed at some scenes, they were funny but as chapters passed , these "funny" scenes became over the top, too exaggerate. The author tried too much to make comedie that it became awkward. As I said previously she is lazy, such a lazy fl, she thinks just about s*x with the ml. 😑 This is a cultivation novel, but she does nothing, she claims to be powerful, but she uses external weapons/powers, not her own power. She has in her soul or sm like that the Divine Medical Sect, in there are 2 children (not humans,just with the aspect) she she took advantage of them so much and shamelessly she never said thank you to them. They needed food and she starved them even though she had the food they needed in front of her "because she doesn't want to lose her money" Btch tf *punch her*you're a princess u have the state treasury, stupid ignorance [img=faceslap] I understand u need to cultivate ur self in order to make the children s food (and to not lose money[img=faceslap]) but then why don't u try making urself powerful in the first place!!! She just thinks about sleeping with the ml,girl, u need to get stronger, someone powerful is after you, he poisoned ur father /tried to get rid of the royal family and u just stay doing nothing? Do u really love ur family? In 200 chapters she never trained seriously, she just wanted to lose fat (bEcAuSe i cAnT sLeEp liKe tHiS wItH tHe Ml) FL rating ☆☆☆☆☆ (I hope u understand is 0) I'm very DISAPPOINTED And the ml... well he's okay, the fl is the problem. He's quite friendly, but cold (clishe) and isn't really that impressive if u ask me. From the hints, he's probably the Ninth Emperor or something like that? Some kind of hero who saved the world ah If I was needed to rate him he ll get ★★☆☆☆, quite disappointing I know The story has some blanc chapters, u just read and u don't know what happened? Like it's so plain and boring, just the mlxfl scenes are a little condimented, the rest is boring. Well, I don't really know at what I was expecting in the first place, I read the other novels from this author (wild wife, evil consort idk the exact names) and they were all the same, cringe with a bad world construction /character development. At them I didn't even reach ch 100 and I dropped, idk how I read this novel till at ch 200, I had such a strong mind, I'm proud 💪📖😭 What makes me extremely sad and depressed is the fact that all the reviews are ★★★★★👌 "iTs sO gOoD" ;"sUcH a gOoD nOvEl" Like I know I shouldn't complain about other people's opinions but what do u see good in this novel? Can tell someone me why? 😭 Just for the spicy scenes /kiss /s*x/? Hm, maybe it's the fact that I read a lot of books and I have higher requirements than others? Well, I don't think so, the book is just plain, the cringe books on wattpad are better, and I don't give hate, these are facts. I want a novel where the fl works hard and she meets the ml for the first time just after 500-1000 chapters, when she improved herself. Why this kind of novel doesn't exist? Well, if u read this till here, I know what you want now. Do i recommend it? Sincerely no. It's a big no no. But if u want to lose some time for nothing and the cringe yourself then go ahead, but I'm sure you will not reach the end of the story, you ll get angry at the fl and stop. So yeah, hope I helped you out. A gif that describes my feelings after reading the novel:

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I agree with your comment 100%....I wondering why other keep saying the novel is so good

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