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    Ahtu_Flagg1yr
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    I hope the story will have more of this, and less moping going forwards. You worry too much about making him seem less competent, and in need of growth than a story like this needs. He already has obstacles to take care of creating those pressures.

    Ch 14 Good News (kinda)
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  • Ahtu_Flagg
    Ahtu_Flagg1yr
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    That's rich mr "what if the deadric lords placed me here with malicious intentions! O.o"...

    I myself wasn't afraid of Madam Pince, I just held a particular amount of respect for her. Fearing another person without an actual basis, to me, was honestly the most stupid thing one could do.
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    Ahtu_Flagg1yr
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    For me, that would have been when I realized I was in the HP world, a wizard about to go to Hogwartz to learn under Flitwick and the rest, and that I was the Dragonborn. For him however, I doubt that would be the case.

    "Now," Ancile waved his wand, levitating tables and chairs back to their normal positions. "You go and practise the Patronus Charm in your spare time and come back to me with your progress next week. I advise that you start off with a happy memory and see where it goes."
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    Ahtu_Flagg1yr
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    Or it was weathering thousands of years that the others didn't, without having the demigod status of Alduin. I'm gonna bet on that.

    Maybe that's why he looked so decrepit. Alduin, someone who Paarthunax saw as an older brother, was far sprier. His rejection of the dovah sil's many desires may have been what resulted in his feeble-looking appearance.
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  • Ahtu_Flagg
    Ahtu_Flagg1yr
    Replied to Wyllt

    Idd, a waste of time for the most part. He should just carve out his own little corner of the world, relax and work on what interests him.

    Despite the transitory excitement, he hungered for more. He knew that for all its boons, this field was not real. What he desired was to be free from that which shackled him and to take to the skies and rule.
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  • Ahtu_Flagg
    Ahtu_Flagg1yr
    Replied to WeedsNsht

    Yeeees... But this is also seemingly good for him. So perhaps it's actually just good for him regardless. It's just him in an improved state, with his emotions in check. Something to strive for.

    Instead, they were akin to a peaceful river, surrounded by solid banks on each side.
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    Ahtu_Flagg1yr
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    In other words, Flitwick's attempt to give him some perspective should have mattered far more than this.

    Well that's Chapter 10. Asim has finally found it within himself to be courageous. I hope it didn't feel superficial, otherwise the last… say 9 chapters would be for naught. If you felt even a bit psyched reading this, then I've done my job. Hope you all enjoyed and until next week, stay on your toes!
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  • Ahtu_Flagg
    Ahtu_Flagg1yr
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    I'm sorry to say I pretty much think so. What he needed was the wisdom, the logic and the perspective to see through the fallacies of what was keeping him down. Courage is but a byproduct of wisdom and motivation in my opinion. There's recklessness ofc, but there's really nothing good about it. Yet it can help you move forward, but you're then doing so blindly, taking huge and usually pointless risks. Sometimes it's necessary to take risks and be a little reckless - But I do not consider that brave per se, it's merely realizing that such has become your best option, ergo it's wisdom and logical reasoning.

    Well that's Chapter 10. Asim has finally found it within himself to be courageous. I hope it didn't feel superficial, otherwise the last… say 9 chapters would be for naught. If you felt even a bit psyched reading this, then I've done my job. Hope you all enjoyed and until next week, stay on your toes!
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    Ahtu_Flagg1yr
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    Actually no, Dumbledore liked to use it for exactly that reason. Because you could remove memories from your head using it. If it could simply copy memories as well, I don't know. But it could certainly be used to contain the original memories.

    'Wait,' I thought, my curiosity resurfacing. 'Why is it called memory extraction when in actuality, we're copying the memory to view at a later date. It's not like we forget the memory now that it's in floaty form.'
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  • Ahtu_Flagg
    Ahtu_Flagg1yr
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    Stop looking for some sort of magical fountain of endles motivation. You're interested in it? Good! Pursue it. If you can keep at it for months without tiring of it, it's not fickle, and may outright grow into a full on obession, but it does not need to be.

    Frowning, I felt the worn textbook cover flake underneath the frustrated rubbing of my index finger. Honestly, I was well-aware that my resolve was shallow. It was one born out of fickle interest, at best. No matter how much I tried to mask it underneath something else, at the heart of the matter, I knew that to be the absolute and irrefutable truth.
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  • Ahtu_Flagg
    Ahtu_Flagg1yr
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    Yes, he feels more like the immature brat that he actually is. One who has not learned how to deal with either his emotions, or the pitfalls of logical philosophy. This does however sadly do nothing to help me relate to him. It only makes me want to speak to him for 5min, to get him out of that wasteful state of mind.

    Do you feel that you have a better grasp on Asim as a character? Do you feel that you understand him? Not necessarily like him or respect him but understand him. I feel that I'm doing a sub-par job of conveying feelings through this story, I don't know why lol.
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  • Ahtu_Flagg
    Ahtu_Flagg1yr
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    Yes it is. We change all the time, what's not easy, is to direct that change in accordance with how you wish to see yourself change. And that is why you should work for it, not waste time and energy fretting about it. Thinking about it is fine, fretting about it is useles and counter-productive. I decided that I wanted to change at 12-13. And I achieved exactly what I wanted with that. Or I should say, changed exactly the way I wanted. I pondered it at length, and then implemented it. I did not fully understand the price of those changes, but I did achieve them. So I lived and learned, and when I was disatisfied with someone of the consequences, I worked to change some aspects again. You are constantly changing, change is easy. It's trying to steer that's hard.

    For those of you who are dissatisfied, I have a question. How easy is it to change? We all desire it. To make something of ourselves. But when it comes down to it, tell me, how easy is it to change?
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  • Ahtu_Flagg
    Ahtu_Flagg1yr
    Replied to Ahtu_Flagg

    PS. I get that you're depressed, but LOGIC! Please!

    What if my entire life here, the bonds that I would forge, the power I planned on accumulating, all of it, was ripped away from me in a sick plot to crush my very being.
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  • Ahtu_Flagg
    Ahtu_Flagg1yr
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    Why would you think so? Molag Bal could not make you Dragonborn, it's not within his power to grant that abiltiy to mortals. At most he may have sent you there, but why would he grant such a boon to one of Akatosh's chosen? Makes little enough sense. Unless you were originally destined for the world of Elder Scrolls. In which case you were merely forced on a detour, one with interesting sights and ppl.

    What if my entire life here, the bonds that I would forge, the power I planned on accumulating, all of it, was ripped away from me in a sick plot to crush my very being.
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  • Ahtu_Flagg
    Ahtu_Flagg2yr
    Replied to crouchingTiger

    Krillin is more like "motivational/moral support" for the most part. But we needed him dying on Namek to make Goku go ape on Freeza/Freiza. As I recall though, her father could have done the same no problem. Ofc, without Bulma, we wouldn't know her father, so there's that.

    Goku nods and motions for Bulma to go in and they both enter Goku's hut. As Bulma looks around, Goku couldn't help but look at Bulma in more detail. Although her face has some childlike features, she is still beautiful and not like the drawing in the anime which was poorly done in the 90s and when the it started becoming better in Super, Bulma was old. Internally, Goku is gushing to meet one of the most memorable and influential characters in Dragon Ball. With her Dragon Radar, spaceship (to Namek), Time Travel technology, and gravity chamber to name a few, she undoubtedly surpasses Yamcha, Tien, and Chaotzu in importance.
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  • Ahtu_Flagg
    Ahtu_Flagg2yr
    Replied to Pons

    We obviously did not read the same paragraph. And, he has twisted most every original event so far - All in ways to try and show-off, only to come off as cringey.

    Goku nods and motions for Bulma to go in and they both enter Goku's hut. As Bulma looks around, Goku couldn't help but look at Bulma in more detail. Although her face has some childlike features, she is still beautiful and not like the drawing in the anime which was poorly done in the 90s and when the it started becoming better in Super, Bulma was old. Internally, Goku is gushing to meet one of the most memorable and influential characters in Dragon Ball. With her Dragon Radar, spaceship (to Namek), Time Travel technology, and gravity chamber to name a few, she undoubtedly surpasses Yamcha, Tien, and Chaotzu in importance.
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  • Ahtu_Flagg
    Ahtu_Flagg2yr
    Replied to Ahtu_Flagg

    Even if I didn't accept the quest, I'd still do it.

    And even if it did somehow work, Team Seven might still get caught up in the ensuing conflict and Sasuke could still be slapped with a curse seal during the commotion. This would still result in a quest failure, leaving me to bear the burden of the penalties despite not being directly involved.
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  • Ahtu_Flagg
    Ahtu_Flagg2yr
    Commented

    That is still a real risk, but considering both the rewards of the quest, and the value in saving Sasuke? Worth it.

    And even if it did somehow work, Team Seven might still get caught up in the ensuing conflict and Sasuke could still be slapped with a curse seal during the commotion. This would still result in a quest failure, leaving me to bear the burden of the penalties despite not being directly involved.
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  • Ahtu_Flagg
    Ahtu_Flagg2yr
    Commented

    Nonsense, with the right sort of secret information included(immortality jutsu, impure world resurrection, plans for Sasuke, maybe even a mention of Itachi's secrets - They'd have no choice but to check it out). He would not need any evidence, that's BS.

    I did think of alternate methods to completing the quest indirectly. Such as directly informing the authorities of Orochimaru's presence in the Chuunin Exam, or causing a big enough commotion in the forest to warrant investigation from the ANBU. But the former method would require evidence which I did not have or the time to get some, while the latter method was just as risky as confronting the Snake Sannin myself.
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    Ahtu_Flagg2yr
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    So don't get caught, and get rid of 2 huge threat's with a few pieces of paper! Easy pie.

    The moment I caught Orochimaru's eye, there would only be two outcomes: An instant Game Over, or a slow and torturous one with me ending up on his laboratory table. Neither of which were even remotely acceptable results.
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