This story is awesome. It's a super flash SI that takes crap from nobody yet he has to figure out a way to live in the marvel verse with all its crazy. It's written by a author that's doing 5k words for each chapter. Not only that, but he edits his work!!! Talk about hard to find quality.
BigToFu
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LIKEYep yep that's my personal goal. Am already at 61k for whole story. As of right now ch12 is 2.4k words in
DropTheMic:Damn 5K words every chapter??!?!? Now im hooked!!!
BigToFu:Yep yep that's my personal goal. Am already at 61k for whole story. As of right now ch12 is 2.4k words in
LoL everyone keeps worrying about his love life. That will be answered within the next few chapters. So let things flow naturally. ✌
Croissance:Okay author i want to ask question.....this is fu*king harem!!, if yes it's good, if not it's okay, if 2-3 girl okay, if 4-5 girl That will be great!, If 6-8 Never think about the storyline, if no romance interest.......i will kill you..
BigToFu:LoL everyone keeps worrying about his love life. That will be answered within the next few chapters. So let things flow naturally. ✌
doesn't seem like you are reading the same novel because there are plenty other chapters showing otherwise .must not b
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BigToFu:doesn't seem like you are reading the same novel because there are plenty other chapters showing otherwise .must not b
Hello, I came to start reading this story a short time ago. I like the way you portray the world and show that you have a good foundation of knowledge about the wonder. But I came to notice the behavior of the MC, increasingly weaker, in relation to his parents, especially his mother, where things have already gone beyond the limits, to respect the parents, to the lack of respect with himself, apart from that to the behavior with the children. women he gets involved with. I see you try to make relationships make sense, so that the harem is not forced. And I can understand that, since in many stories things seem unnatural. Now, I cannot understand the behavior he shows, for the description of what he was like in his first life, even with the current body being that of a teenager, more maturity was expected. I believe you want to use this as a tool for humor, as in many manga and stories, but it misses the point of making it seem something more real, since the MC is someone from our reality going to have a second life in that world. I ask you to look carefully at these things, and thus be able to improve your work, as it is well known that you dedicate great time and care to it.
BigToFu:doesn't seem like you are reading the same novel because there are plenty other chapters showing otherwise .must not b
You should put the NTR tag as gwen is "exploring her sexuality" with other women all the time every time he leaves home to do a mission.
BigToFu:doesn't seem like you are reading the same novel because there are plenty other chapters showing otherwise .must not b
CodezL:You should put the NTR tag as gwen is "exploring her sexuality" with other women all the time every time he leaves home to do a mission.