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Higgs
HiggsLv43yr
2022-04-30 20:06

Started of great, the convo flow seems pleasant with a couple of jokes here and there but then throws it off with the fantasizing of X-genes. The MC supposedly has the knowledge of "The flash" yet throws shallow knowledge of "The flash". The thing is if flash had shown his capabilities earlier in the story like phasing, time travel, mach punch and so on the story would've been more entertaining. Another thing is that the idea of adding the flash along with the X-men seems rather redundant. Why? well, the X-men already has Quicksilver! why add another speedster in it. It wouldve been more exciting if you placed the setting in avengers and the story of avengers from the invasion to end game.

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YEAHHHHH I FULLY AGREE WITH WHAT YOU SAID AT THE END EVEN I THOUGHT THE STORY WOULD BE LIKE THIS BUT FOR SOME REASON IT WAS NOT

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