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Nyaaaaa
NyaaaaaLv44yr
2020-07-19 14:51

The history is good a few plot holes but it can be "original". The problem for me, the relationship of the mc and his 2 gf.(All women are bi it's seems.) With the escuse of Gwen "exploring her sexuallity" she gets a free pass to hit every woman she sees. This novel should have the NTR tag. And everytime the mc is home, nothing happend, the times he sets of on a mission, the 2 gf's got horny and have s*x between them. And well all the **** he gets for doing things he think are right, and when Gwent does a fckup, is all good. He saves 30 people.(1 month grounded, LOL) His AI betrays him, oooh he is just being a good grandson........ This novel just seems about Gold Diggers arround an inmature child with the powers of a god.

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Photosphere
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That last line resumed what I saw on this novel for the time that I read it. Natasha is the only one I can see that truly loves him, everyone else is like they're with him because it is convenient. 'Well, dude has power, is rich, there are a bunch of pretty girls that come with the pack... And they're Bisexual too... Might as well.' Gwen and Jean were with him for some time supposedly, with Gwen being with him for a long time and his first time was with Natasha when she pushed him down lol, that tells pretty much everything.

absolue
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Amitabha, thank you for your sacrifice my brother you saved us 😌🙏🏼🙏🏼

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