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SAGELv24yr
2021-04-02 21:42

At first, I was excited about speed force in Marvel, but you spoiled it. You speeded up the novel dramatically and did not show how the relationship between the characters grew. you filled the story with the characters to the point that I no longer remember how many and most of them were women, and how he built his company is illogical. Makes it as easy as you ignore most Organizations on the Earth as if they did not exist and there are many hasty shots that make the story existing just to the harem.

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Please elaborate. I am still on chapter one, so i would like to know what way story goes. In first chapter itself i hated his decision of sharing his future knowledge about the world with his girlfriend. Does he really blabber about him being Reincarnator and all knowledge about future?

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