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Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv145yr
2019-05-19 17:35

Was okay until ro came in... the whole relationship was forced, mc suddenly changed... was cringy and frankly pissed me off how he interacted with her. LOADS of things where contradicting themselves, some didn't make sense. When you kept switching back and forth, sometimes it was well placed but others felt you where just trying to add extra words and made no sense. You mentioned his master ages ago but nothing happened, seems like you either forgot or was just adding words again. Some of the plotting he did made no sense what so ever, he was meant to know some of the future however how come when things are changing he knows nothing about this other group? Makes no sense. Finally seen too many harems and they're getting old FAST my preference so nothing really wrong with it, just seems forced and unnecessary. I mean with the character he was portrayed as a harem doesn't fit at all. With the wedding? You kept brining up the past but how come he is suddenly okay with marrying someone he knows nothing about ? ohh she seems fantasising... ohh look at that gorgeous body... makes no sense again. I was sort of okay with the shaak ti relationship because one frankly I like her character. Also it does fit with the story with his dead wife and all. Low key, I was waiting all this time for him to lose it and go ham, especially when you mentioned the daughter. Again what chapter was that? Timeeeee ago it's like the fore shadow of fore shadowing.. just can't keep reading this anymore... haaa oh well, bye gl

[Star Wars] Rogue Knight

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Brezer
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Ya stopped reading when the mc changed

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MasterKai808
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well **** yall

Brezer:Ya stopped reading when the mc changed
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Eins_Mensch
Eins_MenschLv14

Because it was a sudden 180 degree change... its just lazy writing at that point.

Brezer:Ya stopped reading when the mc changed
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Lucinda_Hacker
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Bo came in*

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