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DarkImmortal_Intel
DarkImmortal_IntelAuthor6yr
2019-04-22 01:58

Just a headsup. I am not the original author of this story. It's a good LN that I want more people to know about. The author can be found at FanFiction.net and I do NOT try to claim ownership of this. Unable to contact original author. Anyhoot, this story is good. Enjoy!

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Axcart
AxcartLv6

Is the story still alive?

Axcart
AxcartLv6

wow, a 160 chapter completed story, i wish this site had completed fan fiction that are 100 plus chapters

DarkImmortal_Intel
DarkImmortal_IntelAuthor

Um, the author finished the book about a year and a half ago. There's a spinoff side story afterwords though.

DarkImmortal_Intel
DarkImmortal_IntelAuthor

side story and a sequel ***********

Axcart
AxcartLv6

Ill read that after this

DarkImmortal_Intel:side story and a sequel ***********
illuviar
illuviarLv1

You know, it would have been nice to ask me if you could post one of my stories anywhere!

DarkImmortal_Intel:side story and a sequel ***********
DarkImmortal_Intel
DarkImmortal_IntelAuthor

Sweet, hurry up. Mushy mush! :3 Want me to leave it up so you can copy pasta it over easily? Or no? I'll take it down asap.

illuviar:You know, it would have been nice to ask me if you could post one of my stories anywhere!
DarkImmortal_Intel
DarkImmortal_IntelAuthor

Err, wait you might not want to migrate anything over here. I mainly did it cause Fanfic reeeaalllly sucks for user accessibility. Someone had partially copy pasta'd your story over here, but stopped 1/10th of the way over. Had one heck of a time trying to find your book in the search function on fanfic. *sigh* -Angry fist at fanfics crappy interface- Anyhoot, I'm a big fan of yours. If I don't get a response back later today. I'll just assume you wouldn't want to transmigrate your book to this platform. And I'll take it down at the end of the day my time. Also... thanks for writing great works!

illuviar:You know, it would have been nice to ask me if you could post one of my stories anywhere!
illuviar
illuviarLv1

No need to take it down - it helps you did go out of your way to point out you aren't the author however. I've thought about posting RK on other sites besides FF.net, space battles forums, and the sufficient velocity one, however before I bother doing it I would need to find the time to properly go over the story, fix everything I've missed, add couple of story arcs that were intended to be side stories and thus flesh up and explain some things - like what Veil's black ops people are doing in detail and Sev'rance Tann's investigation in what is wrong withing the CIS and thus flesh up the ORR... not to mention introduce much earlier some of the political players from RK II and handle better the Jedi coup... However, when all is said and done, it takes as much if not longer to fix that than writing something new and RK and its sequel aren't small in any sense of the word. That is what primary stopped me from posting the story on either AH.com or AO3, which has the first few chapters...

DarkImmortal_Intel:Err, wait you might not want to migrate anything over here. I mainly did it cause Fanfic reeeaalllly sucks for user accessibility. Someone had partially copy pasta'd your story over here, but stopped 1/10th of the way over. Had one heck of a time trying to find your book in the search function on fanfic. *sigh* -Angry fist at fanfics crappy interface- Anyhoot, I'm a big fan of yours. If I don't get a response back later today. I'll just assume you wouldn't want to transmigrate your book to this platform. And I'll take it down at the end of the day my time. Also... thanks for writing great works!
DarkImmortal_Intel
DarkImmortal_IntelAuthor

I still think you should post on here even if you want to fix things. You can always delete and insert chapters however you like in the 'Create' section. And also, if you have a patreon. Be sure to link it on your profile or novel description. There are a few people on here making a few thousand a month writing fanfics on this site. Some stories, they do the whole SS bit, on others. They'll do 'free' but also take donations from patreon. You're a great writer and I think this platform would be great for exposure for you. It took me... erm... 3ish hours to transfer 600kish words from fanfiction to here. But it would probably be easier for you if you had mine open in one window, and you copy pasta'd in another window at the same time. The formating was a slight pain in the arse cause you can only post up to 15k words per chapter. And some of yours were over that. HAHA. So piece mealing was a pain. But you also started sectioning it off later, so it took more time going back and forth combinging sections (cause I had to flip back and forth nearly 300ish times converting it to this sites format). *sighhh* Anyhoot, if you get the chance, please use this site for more publicity. And you better for fuqs sake be a professional author cause you can totally do it.

illuviar:No need to take it down - it helps you did go out of your way to point out you aren't the author however. I've thought about posting RK on other sites besides FF.net, space battles forums, and the sufficient velocity one, however before I bother doing it I would need to find the time to properly go over the story, fix everything I've missed, add couple of story arcs that were intended to be side stories and thus flesh up and explain some things - like what Veil's black ops people are doing in detail and Sev'rance Tann's investigation in what is wrong withing the CIS and thus flesh up the ORR... not to mention introduce much earlier some of the political players from RK II and handle better the Jedi coup... However, when all is said and done, it takes as much if not longer to fix that than writing something new and RK and its sequel aren't small in any sense of the word. That is what primary stopped me from posting the story on either AH.com or AO3, which has the first few chapters...
Axcart
AxcartLv6

Your book is pretty good monster of a fanfic. I like how you just yeeted the original plot out the window

illuviar:No need to take it down - it helps you did go out of your way to point out you aren't the author however. I've thought about posting RK on other sites besides FF.net, space battles forums, and the sufficient velocity one, however before I bother doing it I would need to find the time to properly go over the story, fix everything I've missed, add couple of story arcs that were intended to be side stories and thus flesh up and explain some things - like what Veil's black ops people are doing in detail and Sev'rance Tann's investigation in what is wrong withing the CIS and thus flesh up the ORR... not to mention introduce much earlier some of the political players from RK II and handle better the Jedi coup... However, when all is said and done, it takes as much if not longer to fix that than writing something new and RK and its sequel aren't small in any sense of the word. That is what primary stopped me from posting the story on either AH.com or AO3, which has the first few chapters...
Axcart
AxcartLv6

I just finished reading all of it. Does his wife live? I knlw fpr a fact hjs master is still alive, no one of that importace dies of screan

kosutaPejeng
kosutaPejengLv6

can you please spell the author on FF.net?

kosutaPejeng
kosutaPejengLv6

ty very much.

Lucinda_Hacker
Lucinda_HackerLv4

Fix your spelling please

Axcart:I just finished reading all of it. Does his wife live? I knlw fpr a fact hjs master is still alive, no one of that importace dies of screan
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Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv14

Was okay until ro came in... the whole relationship was forced, mc suddenly changed... was cringy and frankly pissed me off how he interacted with her. LOADS of things where contradicting themselves, some didn't make sense. When you kept switching back and forth, sometimes it was well placed but others felt you where just trying to add extra words and made no sense. You mentioned his master ages ago but nothing happened, seems like you either forgot or was just adding words again. Some of the plotting he did made no sense what so ever, he was meant to know some of the future however how come when things are changing he knows nothing about this other group? Makes no sense. Finally seen too many harems and they're getting old FAST my preference so nothing really wrong with it, just seems forced and unnecessary. I mean with the character he was portrayed as a harem doesn't fit at all. With the wedding? You kept brining up the past but how come he is suddenly okay with marrying someone he knows nothing about ? ohh she seems fantasising... ohh look at that gorgeous body... makes no sense again. I was sort of okay with the shaak ti relationship because one frankly I like her character. Also it does fit with the story with his dead wife and all. Low key, I was waiting all this time for him to lose it and go ham, especially when you mentioned the daughter. Again what chapter was that? Timeeeee ago it's like the fore shadow of fore shadowing.. just can't keep reading this anymore... haaa oh well, bye gl

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