Ok who ever is reading this should know that this novel, is not a novel at all!!! It's a 100% legitimate book, with each chapter spanning from 70 to 90 pages on average. No spoilers here cause you just need to start reading and you will understand. It has lore and history to it, so those who are hungry for juicy stories that will leave you satisfied should read this one. P.s. I'm not regretting time spent reading it, so will you after.

Just a headsup. I am not the original author of this story. It's a good LN that I want more people to know about. The author can be found at FanFiction.net and I do NOT try to claim ownership of this. Unable to contact original author. Anyhoot, this story is good. Enjoy!

Was okay until ro came in... the whole relationship was forced, mc suddenly changed... was cringy and frankly pissed me off how he interacted with her. LOADS of things where contradicting themselves, some didn't make sense. When you kept switching back and forth, sometimes it was well placed but others felt you where just trying to add extra words and made no sense. You mentioned his master ages ago but nothing happened, seems like you either forgot or was just adding words again. Some of the plotting he did made no sense what so ever, he was meant to know some of the future however how come when things are changing he knows nothing about this other group? Makes no sense. Finally seen too many harems and they're getting old FAST my preference so nothing really wrong with it, just seems forced and unnecessary. I mean with the character he was portrayed as a harem doesn't fit at all. With the wedding? You kept brining up the past but how come he is suddenly okay with marrying someone he knows nothing about ? ohh she seems fantasising... ohh look at that gorgeous body... makes no sense again. I was sort of okay with the shaak ti relationship because one frankly I like her character. Also it does fit with the story with his dead wife and all. Low key, I was waiting all this time for him to lose it and go ham, especially when you mentioned the daughter. Again what chapter was that? Timeeeee ago it's like the fore shadow of fore shadowing.. just can't keep reading this anymore... haaa oh well, bye gl

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Sigh...this book had SO MUCH potential if only it focused more on the characters. The book turned very much from interactions between characters and their implications to a military tactics textbook. It's really exhausting to read 300k words of just ships shooting at each other and military tactics in the later half of the book. If an edited book where all the battles were minimized and changed to focus on the MC to develop his character would be better. The battles should be a way to develop characters, not strictly move the plot forward. The good battles are definitely Ryloth where both the MC, Anakin and Kenobi grew as characters, Mandalore was in the same vein but worse while Genosis was just 'ok', and all the other battles afterward became more and more boring. There's a reason why the movies didn't focus on the battles all that much. You can only stomach ships shooting at each other and blowing up for so long. Especially since this is a 600k word novel...and it's only part 1. Part 2 on ff net is not doing any better. The beginning was good with possible new characters...and then more boring battles. Sigh.,,

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