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Martello_D_King
Martello_D_KingLv33yr
2020-12-03 04:25

The first 150 chapter is great the story flows fluently which i really enjoy but when it reach the later chapter the author decide it best to add marvel world to this which make the chapter before this and every effort put into becoming what the mc is now useless.... All in all its a good story while it last for those who are new do give it a try as for me im leaving im disapointed this used to be my gem and now its just a shard of broken glass what a pity

Rebirth Of The Mightiest Disciple (Reboot)

shashank_bhatt
4.5
634 Chs

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TallicaStew
TallicaStewLv14

At first when the extra content was added I was a bit put off as well but after I read the authors comments I gave it some thought and agreed that it was interesting because the way he set the timelines (which was the estimated timeline the original HSDK took place) the MCU doesn't really begin until years after the original HSDK timeline ends which allows him to continue the story while giving the MC some pressure that he was no longer feeling due to reaching the pinnacle of the original world. Which of course the MC had originally wanted due to just wanting to get strong enough then relax. MCs aren't allowed to relax until we are done with them darn it. The characters he's adding in already are just to join up the worlds with an estimated past timeline from before the MCU started on the big screen. And while I did like how the original ended I like the idea of the story continuing, but I do think the MC needs to slow down because at this point his Harem has already reached the max size that should be comfortably handled.

3yr
Ttsfih
TtsfihLv4

could u spoiler me who is in mc harem?

TallicaStew:At first when the extra content was added I was a bit put off as well but after I read the authors comments I gave it some thought and agreed that it was interesting because the way he set the timelines (which was the estimated timeline the original HSDK took place) the MCU doesn't really begin until years after the original HSDK timeline ends which allows him to continue the story while giving the MC some pressure that he was no longer feeling due to reaching the pinnacle of the original world. Which of course the MC had originally wanted due to just wanting to get strong enough then relax. MCs aren't allowed to relax until we are done with them darn it. The characters he's adding in already are just to join up the worlds with an estimated past timeline from before the MCU started on the big screen. And while I did like how the original ended I like the idea of the story continuing, but I do think the MC needs to slow down because at this point his Harem has already reached the max size that should be comfortably handled.
3yr
TallicaStew
TallicaStewLv14

Pretty much all the named girls that people would add to a HSDK harem before the Yomi arc except the flower club girl, and some he added from other properties. He's up to 7 currently. All good choices.

Ttsfih:could u spoiler me who is in mc harem?
3yr
Dieudonner_17
Dieudonner_17Lv5

7 And character profile has loyal🤦🏾‍♂️😂😂😂

TallicaStew:Pretty much all the named girls that people would add to a HSDK harem before the Yomi arc except the flower club girl, and some he added from other properties. He's up to 7 currently. All good choices.
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FBI_B1TCH
FBI_B1TCHLv14

I can't vote any stones for this novel. Did you use Japanese characters somewhere in the novel? We all know how the Chinese hate the Japanese 😐😒

5yr

HaoYue
HaoYueLv2

Im a fan of the original and definitely wants to see kenichi become much stronger. But in just 10chap he was already trading blows with a master like apachai which doesnt know how to hold back and is 1 of the masters while wearing 35kg anklets on each limb. While he didnt win, he came out unscathe, then i dare say he's already the mightiest disciple at this point. Not to mention that the author is a virgin fat otaku, who would even get girls by telling them their his girlfriend already at 1st meeting? All characters degraded with negative IQs. Honestly I'll still keep reading as there's no other kenichi fanfic but this is such a low quality, seriously.

5yr
Peace12345
Peace12345Lv5

Great story so far and the relationships are not rushed. If in the origional you got tired of Kenichi getting his ass handed to him in practically all his fights and just barely winning then this is for you. This Kenichi is way stronger and he is not afraid to tell the girls he loves them. There are also a couple of new elements so far that might be leading this world to be a mixed anime one, so if you like those then give it a try. One thing that I like but others might not is that the pacing is pretty slow, but then again the original was pretty long. Looking forward to where the author takes this.

5yr
TroJian
TroJianLv11

A very normal fan fic where the author don't really care about writing anything good and just throws us what he writes, was enjoying the story but the grammar is so bad that you would need to try hard to actually make the mistakes: freind(friend), there(they're), hitted, buyed... I'll stop cause it hurts remembering. No use giving advices or helping with the grammar since the author just ignores.

5yr
Zetsway
ZetswayLv12

The MC is crap. There is almost no logic in his actions. The world was made in a polygamy accepting society(meaning world-wide), however, it seems like only the MC can benefit from that. Other women(his mother even) get offended when their man even mentions a harem, the MC's women, ofc they are happy to be sidelined...Harem can be fun to read. If the author can make some sort of emotional connection with the girls, and then the girls talk things out with his and they all agree, then it's a good harem. Here? Well the MC sees a girl goes to her and sais "You are my wife from now on!" and ofc the girl blushes and nods...even if they have no Idea who one another is. I'm really sorry that this is so bad, it's one of the few Kenichi stories and I really wanted to read something in that fandom.*sigh...*

3yr
SYIHAAKIRA
SYIHAAKIRALv14

The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapter is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. Even though I spent a stone spirit I still hope you carry on your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter for every day.

5yr
Dragopayne23
Dragopayne23Lv11

This story is what an amazing fan-fic should aspire to be. Sometimes you don't have to completely change the story when writing/making one. You just need to change the transitions and give more/different backgrounds to people.

5yr
daremetochoosemyna
daremetochoosemynaLv13

Last review... It's waste of time. This site is very fair! Those numbers display TRUE popularity and quality of novel. Thanks for bringing hope in good social behaviors! I don't know how would real gems got discovered if not fair system of reviews. Good job Webnovel!

4yr
Sondre
SondreLv13

A good story, with a Kenichi that I wish would have been the mc of the anime, as this Kenichi is much more enjoyable to watch/ read about. The story is progressing at a nicely, and at a good pace. Though something that keeps distracting me from the story and immersing myself fully is that there are a lot of spelling/ grammer mistakes and using words that don't make sense in sentences. Other than that it is a very good story.

5yr
sleepingdragon69
sleepingdragon69Lv10

Hey awesome you brought it back and you are able to keep posting because it is a really good story and there aren't many Kenichi stories. So keep up the good work

5yr
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