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TroJian
TroJianLv115yr
2019-11-27 09:43

A very normal fan fic where the author don't really care about writing anything good and just throws us what he writes, was enjoying the story but the grammar is so bad that you would need to try hard to actually make the mistakes: freind(friend), there(they're), hitted, buyed... I'll stop cause it hurts remembering. No use giving advices or helping with the grammar since the author just ignores.

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Nickelaos_Nogaro
Nickelaos_NogaroLv12

i am quiet agree with this, even if i know my grammar isn't good as well.. there just too much fault that it give us some headache sometime... but without it, the story is nice

Primordial_Saiyan
Primordial_SaiyanLv4

U speek raait maai freind. Daa gaandmaar is jaast horibel. Maai eyes ded.

SunSinkingSerpent
SunSinkingSerpentLv4

there're ffs which grammar are worse

Hydra_Chan
Hydra_ChanLv13

jesus, and the worst thing is, there is a wonderful thing called auto correct... just set the auto correct languages to english man

Primordial_Saiyan:U speek raait maai freind. Daa gaandmaar is jaast horibel. Maai eyes ded.
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