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HaoYue
HaoYueLv25yr
2019-10-24 02:34

Im a fan of the original and definitely wants to see kenichi become much stronger. But in just 10chap he was already trading blows with a master like apachai which doesnt know how to hold back and is 1 of the masters while wearing 35kg anklets on each limb. While he didnt win, he came out unscathe, then i dare say he's already the mightiest disciple at this point. Not to mention that the author is a virgin fat otaku, who would even get girls by telling them their his girlfriend already at 1st meeting? All characters degraded with negative IQs. Honestly I'll still keep reading as there's no other kenichi fanfic but this is such a low quality, seriously.

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shashank_bhatt
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Sorry about that maybe I wasn't able to depict it in a better way as Kenichi hasn't reached that level where if Apachai really used his full strength he could block it. Apachai may doesn't no how to hold back but it's in comparison to the rest that's what I think otherwise in the original manga Kenichi would have died in the starting only after taking one of Apachai's kick.

DearCompanion
DearCompanionLv4

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TheLonelyGod
TheLonelyGodLv14

I don't know. I like it thou. But still you gotta chill with those insults man...if you don't like it then just don't read it.it's as simple as that...this is a fanfic after all..

newthings
newthingsLv6

is this still "i wont hit girls" novel? if its changed i want to continue reading

shashank_bhatt
shashank_bhattAuthor

No mc hot girls without any guilt.

newthings:is this still "i wont hit girls" novel? if its changed i want to continue reading
OldPhilosopher
OldPhilosopherLv5

Its ok author we still love you don't feel down just hearing the opinions of others rather just remember the mistakes and make sure you never repeat the same mistake again, Failure is the father of success

shashank_bhatt:Sorry about that maybe I wasn't able to depict it in a better way as Kenichi hasn't reached that level where if Apachai really used his full strength he could block it. Apachai may doesn't no how to hold back but it's in comparison to the rest that's what I think otherwise in the original manga Kenichi would have died in the starting only after taking one of Apachai's kick.
1drago
1dragoLv2

A mi me parese muy buena

asdasdssf
asdasdssfLv1

Dude this is review section, not insult forum.

Knived
KnivedLv10

I got Cancer reading that.

shashank_bhatt:No mc hot girls without any guilt.
Hadrian_P
Hadrian_PLv4

I know this is a harem but how big is it? I Just started reading the story and i really like it but i dislike in general huge haRems where There are too many girls u forget at some point about them.

Xynusder
XynusderLv3

hate to break it to you but when it comes to webnovel people this is normal you probably already got use to it at this point

asdasdssf:Dude this is review section, not insult forum.
Leylin_123
Leylin_123Lv14

totalmente cierto, muy pocas veces veo cuando se toman el esfuerzo de tratar de argumentar y razonar el porque no les agrado y que defectos han visto en la lectura sin insultar o simplemente mencionar sus gustos y ya, en fin comenzare esta novela a ver que tal. (ya tengo leidos como 5 mangas que tienen que ver con kenichi).

Xynusder:hate to break it to you but when it comes to webnovel people this is normal you probably already got use to it at this point
Santy_Melay
Santy_MelayLv1

You ruined it for me with the clones, it's incredibly stupid, make him face a powerful enemy and not be able to remove them in time; and also a pathetic excuse to weaken him. And I also hate that it can change shape, too convenient.

shashank_bhatt:Sorry about that maybe I wasn't able to depict it in a better way as Kenichi hasn't reached that level where if Apachai really used his full strength he could block it. Apachai may doesn't no how to hold back but it's in comparison to the rest that's what I think otherwise in the original manga Kenichi would have died in the starting only after taking one of Apachai's kick.
Santy_Melay
Santy_MelayLv1

Also delay, if the technique is called clones, it is because they are clones, don't invent nonsense.

shashank_bhatt:Sorry about that maybe I wasn't able to depict it in a better way as Kenichi hasn't reached that level where if Apachai really used his full strength he could block it. Apachai may doesn't no how to hold back but it's in comparison to the rest that's what I think otherwise in the original manga Kenichi would have died in the starting only after taking one of Apachai's kick.
DaoistojZfIq
DaoistojZfIqLv14

he nearly did every time but was saved by the other masters medical skills, it's only until apa learned to hold back that they didn't need to do it as much, also Kenichi has little to zero talent in the original work so that is why he struggles so much if it wasn't for his hard work , horniness, and multiple masters helping him he would of made little to no progress at all

shashank_bhatt:Sorry about that maybe I wasn't able to depict it in a better way as Kenichi hasn't reached that level where if Apachai really used his full strength he could block it. Apachai may doesn't no how to hold back but it's in comparison to the rest that's what I think otherwise in the original manga Kenichi would have died in the starting only after taking one of Apachai's kick.
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