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pandabananaLv55yr
2019-08-22 19:04

That earnest skill. That’s bull**** on every single level. Leveling probably on a generous amount gives you lets say 20 stat points right? So if you level up to 20 and come back to murder level one trash mobs you can become god. I like quick novels, but all the curses just make him seem like a absolute fucking retard. He played the game for 7 years and he still fails to be calm, and still acts like an immature little *****. No fucking wonder his team only made it to c-rank. Any rational human being who has a brain of any sort can make a better team with his resources. So make him an actual veteran or make him a retard choose one not both.

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SUBSCRIBE_MY_LISTLv5

Hmm you're emotional about this sort of thing. Remember this guys game world is like runescape wildernis, ultra legendary game unique roulette rewards and permadeath. Imagine being the world's richest best geared player after playing a game for most of your life and suddenly you die and have to start from scratch as if you got a new account and clean up Horse **** for a living because all the methods you used before were based on unique quests that you ran into by luck and won't be able to get again. Aka you might as we have been memory wiped and dumped in a different game. To catch up again is not a simple rehash. It's a whole new play through. As if you're switching from wow to bdo or something despite all your friends still being at the top where you used to be and them being unable to boost you up due to game mechanics forcing them to make the decision to cut off relations with you since you will likely not be the same lev as them again. Thus I get why he's nervous. He's got a reason to be because he has too many game breaking uniqueness going on to be able to afford to loose it and burn those unique out of the game forever. I too would try to play smart and steady, even if I'd definitely feel the nerves at a low level.

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Morning_FragranceLv14

Writing quality is dull and boring. There's unneeded censoring, improper use of pronouns, and unappealing descriptions for skills and ****. Story development is terrible, it's going at a steady pace but the obvious plot armor is too blinding to look at. There is absolutely no balancing and stats along with skills are just randomly slapped down while the author thinks, "No one is going to bother to calculate anything, so it's fine. I'm a genius for making mobs so overpowered that a lot of people are in an endless loop of crippling their accounts." Character design.. Oh man, oh ****... Main character is trash for someone who has 7 years of experience while also running a guild/team/whatever you want to call it. I thought, "C-tier? Must of been really behind." But it's quite obvious that the main character is a fucking retard who made his way from sheer luck. Regarding NPCs and other players, their personality and appeal is just as worse as the main character; they're just really stale fluff to add onto the MC's sub-par design. World background. Almost non-existent. Locations names are just dropped down in text, there is no descriptions to build up on the scenery. "It's a cave. It's a forest. It's a road. It's a village." I wouldn't care if the main character was absolute trash if there was an actual world out there and not some **** that was thrown down on the spot without any details. Final verdict - Not even worth to read as a throwaway. And why the **** are you putting so much time into explaining the benefits of the beta when he's going to lose everything when the game officially launches? Please improve the world development, a story isn't a story without an actual world to it.

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