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LightningAsura
LightningAsuraAuthor6yr
2019-04-13 00:06

As the author of this novel, I will leave a review to summarize what is this novel about (since the synopsis doesn't tell much :") This is the story of a person who is in despair of his disability and his awaiting death, who gets the chance to enter a revolutionary VR game for a chance to get cured. But he starts with 9 other testers, as the only players within the whole game world, with different innate abilities that differentiates them from the common folk. Starting as a game native, and building up his strength in this game where getting logged out equals death **: this is my first novel here, I wish you enjoy it, power stones & feedback would be appreciated.

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ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6

Is this supernatural or VR game only? Any changes in the main world?

LightningAsura
LightningAsuraAuthor

It's more about the game, as Ian stays in the game for the period of the testing (at least till some point), While his real body is hibernating in the game capsule.

ErozothDraeor:Is this supernatural or VR game only? Any changes in the main world?
Denzel_theking
Denzel_thekingLv6

Can’t believe this is on web novel and I never saw it only cause of chapter 53 on scribble hub i learned it is here

LightningAsura:It's more about the game, as Ian stays in the game for the period of the testing (at least till some point), While his real body is hibernating in the game capsule.
Denzel_theking
Denzel_thekingLv6

I meant 52

Denzel_theking:Can’t believe this is on web novel and I never saw it only cause of chapter 53 on scribble hub i learned it is here
AraAra
AraAraLv11

How about the romance? Harem or Single?

LightningAsura:It's more about the game, as Ian stays in the game for the period of the testing (at least till some point), While his real body is hibernating in the game capsule.
Lazyhead
LazyheadLv6

Sound like mythrans master of all of royalroadl site. A disable kid who gets the chance to be a beta player and experience the life he never had.

ELord
ELordLv12

Hey is this harem or not? Please tell me as i don't want to waste my time reading harem novels.

LightningAsura
LightningAsuraAuthor

Nah, don't worry it isn't harem.

ELord:Hey is this harem or not? Please tell me as i don't want to waste my time reading harem novels.
LightningAsura
LightningAsuraAuthor

Sorry for the late reply, not harem.

AraAra:How about the romance? Harem or Single?
LGND
LGNDLv10

Hope it isn't a stupid flok of girls arou d the mc while the mc cares only for one girl.

LightningAsura:Sorry for the late reply, not harem.
Raoj_Nfe
Raoj_NfeLv4

Excellent story buddy. No BS at all.

Misty_Gin
Misty_GinLv5

Does this novel contain romance or not??? Coz I am not interested in monk MC that don't even gaze at women... Thanks

UltimateGodlyGene
UltimateGodlyGeneLv13

Ok one question, I just found this book. And this has a good review. Is this story dark? Is the protagonist gonna be a psychipath or something?. Pleae dont I want it to be lively, adventurous

LightningAsura
LightningAsuraAuthor

Protagonist isn't a psychopath, don't worry.

UltimateGodlyGene:Ok one question, I just found this book. And this has a good review. Is this story dark? Is the protagonist gonna be a psychipath or something?. Pleae dont I want it to be lively, adventurous
Daoist198784
Daoist198784Lv4

in real life, he will remain disabled? In reality, is he just an ordinary person? Or did he relocate to the game?

LightningAsura:Protagonist isn't a psychopath, don't worry.
HansTheCool
HansTheCoolLv5

Is the mc op good sir?

HansTheCool
HansTheCoolLv5

Is the mc op good sir?

LightningAsura
LightningAsuraAuthor

At the current chapter count, he would be considered op, but he grows into that power through actual steps, it's a weak to strong kind of novel.

HansTheCool:Is the mc op good sir?
Fiearen
FiearenLv11

Just imagining this from a real life perspective you wouldn't even get the chance to range at the game for crashing since you'd be dead.

Aoalbjorn
AoalbjornLv3

Most satisfying thing about this novel is The MC is master of all trades and hes solo.

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EarthGames
EarthGamesLv11

Overall a good storry, but it has it´s faults as well. First of all the characters, the main character is the only one who we get to know really, the rest just apear for a couple of chapters and become irelevant rather quickly. He rarely has conversations with people that last more than a couple of sentences, it would be nice to increase his relations and interactions with the people arround him. (Idon´t know your future plans so maybe this is already planed) furthermore the mc is becoming more and more powerful physically but he doesn´t show much emotion other than his strict planing. I mean he has crazy high iteligence but everybody has his faults, there are no perfect people. The story development is solely focused on the mc and where he goes, there are some mentions and short pov´s of the villains but nothing major yet. It would be nice to learn more about the backhround and everthing that is going on arround him. The aspect of world background is in my opinion pretty good overall. The only problem I have is that we know where he is, what he does but not much more. We rarely get decriptions of his suroundings or other stuff like this. As a final note, this is my first review of any kind of storry I´v read. So this it probably rather subjective and partly wrong so read it yourself. It is a great story if you like story with an insanely powerful mc who gets stronger and strong in short period of time. Finaly to the author: please try to increase the chapter length, your story is great but it would be even better with longer chapters, this way we as readers can imerse ourselfes more and not just read 5 minutes or so each day and forget what happened the next. P.S. English isn´t my first language so go easy on my gramar

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