BE WARNED...BE WARNED,,,,this asshole writer writes some amazing **** only to drop or just not continue. [everyone of his one piece FF's, his BNHA FF's Bandit king FF]....so yah, be warned] **: author, just saying, the FF's mentioned above make ur other **** look like ****, IDK, they were really cool, if possible update...also, try not to do what u did in ur FF's with major success [mangaka bk, DXD FF, ] and create a pokemon MC,,,,,take **** slow, if possible

First of all the MC is a child a legit child but him and Ur have romantic feelings for eachother it is f*cking weird and lastly the most recent chapter I read just forced the plot even more than it already has been lol if the author fixes that forced nonsense then I’d change the review but until then nope

Okay, so there are a couple of things. First, the grammar is terrible, HOWEVER, you do see some improvement in it so hopefully, that continues. Second, for me, the mc is way too young from the title I assumed he would be older compared to the rest of the cast. This would then perfectly fit in with his romance with ur. I mean I kinda want to see the mc x ur as the only pairing. Then he could have ultear as his daughter etc. Only my preference but think it would have fit with the story much more. I mean the only way they can be together is if ur is stuck in the ice shell and doesn't age. However, even with this I still feel the mc is too young for the story idea. If this does turn into a harem, then I will prob drop. For me, there are just way too many harem stories on this site already. Personally, any story that has a harem tag I don't even consider reading it... What I do love about this story is how unique the idea is. I haven't ever read something like this so am looking forward to it. As I said before the only problem (for me) is I feel the mc is way too young. Other than this the story has tons of potential.

Its much more like a copy of fairy tail canon. I thought that this fanfic will explore the depth of fairy tail but in the end, the author force the plot to follow canon to a t. Also the plot where ultear saw gray and lyon practicing are the same as in canon. And she also goes run away again furious for her mother happiness.

"Wide as an ocean, deep as a puddle" The story suffers the same problems from his other works. Repetitive writing. The uses of the same pronouns get tiring to read. Using the same conjunction to convey character feelings over and over again. Stretched out the story with barely any impact on the story. Imagining the time skip will be painful from his track records. Details that don't have any relevance to the story. Seriously none wanted to know the size of a kid's penis. The story most likely will follow canon, just like his other works. It's disappointing to read a story from someone who made money from. You could copy paste a review from his other works and most of them would apply to this story. This is just sad, barely any improvement after writing for a year.

As of Chapter 55 The most disappointing Akikan fiction yet. It's disturbing how he talks about the mc as a kid. Downright creepy. Talking about a 4-5 year olds **** for multiple paragraphs is just too much. Even if you look past that, this story is a bore. Akikan has this story by a leash, and is dragging the poor thing against it's will. The story doesn't flow and it feels forced. At no point have I felt any excitement while reading, it just drones on. I'm just waiting for him to inevitably drop it and move on to a new idea.

author is so disappointing, this fanfic had the potential and was planning to stick till the next 2 chapters,but you just killed it dude. the story development is already so slow and I think the author is already losing inspirations to continue this fanfic, you should have just dropped it instead of ruining your work

so the synopses and the name of the fanfic gave me the thought that this history will be about the mc being the leader of the magic council and change many things in ishgar but all I see is a annoying mc that only want to create a business kingdom,i don mind if the name and the synopses of the fic is different but these two give me different expectations and when something completely different is show it only make me angry and disapoited to have wasted so many time and interest

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