"Wide as an ocean, deep as a puddle" The story suffers the same problems from his other works. Repetitive writing. The uses of the same pronouns get tiring to read. Using the same conjunction to convey character feelings over and over again. Stretched out the story with barely any impact on the story. Imagining the time skip will be painful from his track records. Details that don't have any relevance to the story. Seriously none wanted to know the size of a kid's penis. The story most likely will follow canon, just like his other works. It's disappointing to read a story from someone who made money from. You could copy paste a review from his other works and most of them would apply to this story. This is just sad, barely any improvement after writing for a year.
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